oh oh that's a good one imma use that line when I use up all the hot water total smart-ass

FP's name is Phoebe

I like this one

Alchemy and sleeping with Finn... Lol

Ending was better for sure. Story rating... 6/10... EFFORT, I tell you, you had EFFORT

Spells, spells, spells... And I'm totally confused. O_o

I thought this would be a good 'Finname' story... But... Idk... Plot just wonking around everywhere... Lemme go onto the last chapter...

o_O

Weird.

Still gotta finish this story.

Good, but the bondage-like Bubbline is making me squick. I hate seeing Marceline like this. THAT IS NOT MARCELINE. (At least not outright.) I'd go as far as saying that some higher evil is using her as its device.

I have that lurching sensation that Marcy is quite evil here. I don't feel a soul.

Excellent story.

Test one two three, testing one two three I'm seeing this this will get through

Excellent fic, I was impressed by the style and quality of writing. You really should explore this pairing more often in your work. Personally, I'd love to see a fanfic where Finn becomes King of Ooo. Also, great depiction with Marceline's 'deal' for Sholeh to obtain magic from her. Very dark and insidious, certainly matches the trappings of vampirism. Hope to see more AT fics from you soon!

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Why have you not made a new one I read this same one last year sorry if I sound rude.

Tippy toppy!
Although, it needed a really good sex scene