Reviews for The Abduction of the Flame Princess |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this story! Its great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() and as I read further it suddenly became weird and as twisted as the early parts... and im not gonna read any further from here |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to Hand it to ya... thia story is Fuked up as Fuk. just from the Intro itself... Ice King Impregnated Flame Princess... *claps. Well Done.. |
![]() ![]() come on man finish it please...I really like it...except for the sex part :P |
![]() ![]() Ok I have to address something, here you have Ice King who is going through these extreme lengths to get a princess, why the heck doesn't he just make one out of ice, I mean my gob we clearly see making snowmen and giving them life you'd think he'll just poof one up himself. And for that matter why does Finn keep on feeding into his habit? Why doesn't he just crack and tell that blue gremlin what he really to do? |
![]() ![]() Now don't get me wrong I love this story it's a freak'n masterpiece. But I still can't believe you put sex in adventure time. |
![]() ![]() Really you put sex in a Finn and FP fan fiction are you mad, what perverted side of you thought that up. I mean it's Adventure Time, and that mixed with sex is just. EEEwww. |
![]() ![]() Awesome story man just perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. |
![]() ![]() MAKE ANOTHER |
![]() ![]() dont stop wryting this a great these stories is the best part of my day. i snaped my legs a month ago and ive been reeding these in my bed and on couch my when i can get up. |
![]() ![]() Great! |
![]() ![]() I like the story but billy was a fighter and he killed monsters. But I think I want to read more . plese make more chapters . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story except i dont know how to say fp's name |
![]() ![]() You gonna make more chapters? You should. |