|Reviews for Petrified|
| adafrog chapter 1 . 10/8
| tammgrogan chapter 1 . 9/26
| noreenklose chapter 1 . 9/14
Thanks for writing.
I really enjoy your stories.
The word is "ponce", not "pounce". Ponce is a British word meaning an effeminate man. Pounce is what a cat does to a mouse...a sudden swoop or spring to catch prey.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18
While I agree that the wizarding world is certainly biased against muggleborns, I can't see them denying Hermione medical care. Wouldn't the doctors have to take a similar oath as muggle doctors?
It's a good thing Harry had the house warded, because wouldn't his wand be snapped by dropping out of Hogwarts? The wards would have prevented the Ministry from getting to him.
I liked the narration style, like they were giving a press conference.
| willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 6/2
nice very well done
| HPManiac4ever chapter 1 . 3/28
Nice story. Quite different plot. Well done.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
"he sold all his shares in many magical businesses at the lowest possible rates. This crippled the economy of magical Britain."
You should look up how shares work, or maybe just leave out the details if you are not interested in economy. You basically write that that he gave away a lot of money and that crippled the economy.
There are people who think this is a reasonable approach to economic growth, the downside is that the growth is expensive and probably short.
On a practical side, we know that Dumbledore would never let Harry go, after all he was the weapon to kill Voldemort.
| sourav15 chapter 1 . 10/27/2015
A really good story. Thank you.
| l3ct0r chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
interesting one, not the best, not the worst
the start of the story is a very good one and the following explanation is a realistic one, but the new life is a little forced but its a 1shot, the idea that its he transcription of and interview or a press conference is a pretty good idea
thanks by share this story, keep wrking
| D.Mentor chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
| Deathmvp chapter 1 . 5/9/2015
Great oneshot here.
| EndlessChains chapter 1 . 5/5/2015
A interesting story. Thsi was well done with being off canon and the idea hat the basilisk gaze froze her mind. The emotions are portrayed really well with Harry as he suffered through anger, hope, sadness, and elation with Hermione as well as the love he feels for her. The descritption of the coma she was in as well as the aftereffects of not moving the body for a long time was well done as she was finally awoken. Your explanation about the mind arts was well done and lead to Harry finding a way to cure her of it even if It takes a while. The devotion and log in the stpry was well done as Harry stopped his life to save hers. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
| Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 1/23/2015
1. I find it's hard to believe two medical professionals allowed 13-year boy to take care of their daughter, instead of researching the treatment of long-time coma patients themselves.
2. You do realize that by crippling the economy of the wizardling Britain he not only bankrupted the wealthly pureblood bigots, but Weasleys, Longbottoms and Lovegoods suffered too? "Apparently, the others refused to even do that" is not an excuse. Maybe they tried but failed. After all, the only owl that could pass their wards was Hedwig.
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Not complete, as Snape got away with killing Sirius.
| desireejones99 chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Pretty excellent, really deserved 2 more chapters as the end was very rushed