Well, not bad.

I was hoping if anyone would write more Mysterious Girlfriend X/Nazo no Kanojo X regular fanfics and crossover fanfics in the future.

It was dissapointing that there weren't any of it.

very neat! it seems a bit choppy, but hey, its only the first chapter! ive seen the anime, and i thought it was interesting. the ending of the anime made me go, "WTF!" but even so...

anyway, Arigatō for writing this. it was an interesting take on both. never would have thought of this combo . good job!