Reviews for Elemental
Beside Moonlight chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
Aw... so beautiful! I've always loved hearing about the Pool from Sherlock's POV.
cvourvoulidis chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
That was soo good! Loved the detail and suspense! U got it right. It was like i was watching that scene all over again, but it ended diffenerntly XD.
pikaace chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Awwww! Now I wish this happened in the episode! Season 3 better have a lot more Johnlock moments like this! Great story! Hope to see more!
Ivan Branginski chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
:3 I would have liked it if john died, but this was a good fan fiction anyway! You have placed 3 out of my 10 fav authors -
TheTruthInYourEyes chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Would you PLEASE write MORE of this? It reads like the original story I'm in love with it, with your imagination, with your style! :-)) Using the original texts and scenes from the TV show and completing it with thoughts and feelings of the characters that couldn't/can't be transported by the film itself - makes it all special! 333 Thanks so much for sharing this with us!
Greetings and much Admiration from
Vienna, Austria
Transcendental Starlight chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
This is a beautiful story. I really never thought about how important those plans were, but it shows real character development when Sherlock is willing to give up the prize to save John. A splendid rewrite of this scene!
Deanadelyon chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Reading this made me happy. Lovely story, excellent view of the goings-on in Sherlock's head. Great work!
zealousfreak27 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Wow! This is staggeringly good! It's beautifully introspective and I love the looks into Sherlock's brain.

Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
I love this fic. The darn introspection is awesome. Great job.
Lady Sam Mallory chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
nicely done. Thanks for the lovely read.

Clara Christine Eveline chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
There really should be more reviews! This was an amazing conclusion. I prefer it to what actually happened! Anyway, fantastic job with description and Sherlock's feelings for John. Please, anytime you want, write another story for Sherlock and his beloved companion. :D

forgetmenotjimmy chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
I love how they both saved each other, and Sherlock's POV was excellently written, well done!

sahoin chapter 1 . 3/31/2012



the voices



abni chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Wonderful story, very well written. I love how you go into Sherlock's head in the scene from the ep, and your continuation of it is just perfect - and *happy sigh* you gave us a huuuug YAY!

Will be very (im)patiently waiting to read more from you :)


laconiclurker chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
This is really terrific. The pool scene is probably my favorite, and I love how you drew out the part that actually happened with such vivid detail and insight into what Sherlock was thinking (very in-character). I especially enjoyed lines like this:

"This is a turn-up, isn't it, Sherlock?" the man asked. Each word might have been a prod in Sherlock's chest with a burning iron poker.

And I liked your take on the alternate ending. Great work.
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