|Reviews for Lunatique|
| Feng Lengshun chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Amazing. Simply amazing. This is my headcanon from now on. It was just simply so... amazing. While I did notice a few rougher parts, I have to say that overall this one-shot had been very entertaining. Although Nasu did said that they would need a budget four times of Mahoyo and him using a Magic Square, I think this one was already plenty great.
You know, I usually have lots of criticisms and comments, but so far, I could only say that your works are awesome, Moczo. Keep up the great work!
| Zurker chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
| Dreamer of Universes chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Definitely one of the best-written fanfics I've ever read! I mean, the story and plot is already awesome (I just love your portrayal of Zeltrech especially; he was funny and well-developed, so much so that I almost forgot this was a fanfic I was reading), but your writing itself is what makes this oneshot so good. You do narration excellently with perfectly placed funny comments placed here and there, you show just enough of the characters inner thoughts without going overboard, and your battle scenes feel just right for the setting. What's more, you utilize details from the Nasuverse so well that I can hardly believe a fan is writing this. (Unless some new information contradicts this, I will always consider this cannon in my heart.) Honestly, I like this better than most multi-chapter stories I read, and even some actual novels. I'm definitely going to read more of your work from now on.
| Stormwhite chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Superb - I'm adopting this as my headcanon until Nasu contradicts it in some way.
| Orcodon chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Holy crap. Good job making Crimson Moon a tough bastard.
| FriedIce chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Wow. This was great. The story of how Zeltretch stopped the moon.
So the confrontation was awesome and honestly if that was all you'd written I'd probably still have like it.
But this was SO much more. The way you set the story up with the interaction with Rin, in my opinion the most 'human' of the fate characters (most of the others are just high functioning psycopaths), was brilliant as were the insights in Crimson Moon's character and motives.
One thing that really stuck out to me was this line 'Fantastic, the Horror from Beyond the Stars has gazed upon our species, and decided the worst parts are worth emulating. I suppose we should be proud.' It really sums up the fic.
Thanks for writing it.
| joshuafaramir chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
This is so badass... instant fav! Author!
| ZxZ Fic Hunter chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
This is fantastic,truly fantastic.
Certainly one of the best Type Moon fanfiction i've ever read.
| PML7 chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
That was good. Thank you for sharing.
| reality deviant chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
| Grey Muji chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Nice story! Like how you portrayed the fight!
| brunofanofk chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
worth note story, very good indeed. Keep going, this gos to my favorites
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This should be cannon.
| Morrigan's Wings chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
This is really well-written. I enjoy most of your work, but this stands out to me for some reason. It really made me like Zelretch's character, and I find I'd like to see a story of his first few days/weeks/years as a Dead Apostle. I'd be thrilled if you wrote something like that.
| Tikigod784 chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Excellent. It's a shame so much of Type-Moon's universe is implied rather than shown outright like this. But maybe that's the real draw. Nice work.