Reviews for A Murder
thexlastxfantasy chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Okay, so after reading your "Something Anyone Would Wish For" I'm on an adventure to read all of your stories (well ones that are about works I know). I now feel the need to rewatch The Crow. Oh it's been so long *sigh*
Lovely story! I hope you are going to continue it? If not, that's a perfect ambiguous ending.
Redluna chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
I can't believe I never reviewed this! This was one of my favorite things that you've written because the tone of it was so brilliantly chilling.
Sarela Jade chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Wow, very intriguing!

I truly liked this. Especially the first line- it really grabs you and takes you into the story. And now with that ending, it leaves me wanting more!

I think the only suggestion I could make would be to maybe expand on the setting. We know that she is in a bar, but having some accented descriptions to maybe emphasize that would've been cool! But otherwise, you did a FANTASTIC job! :)

Can't wait for more!