Reviews for The Day the Earth Stood Still
SoapyMayhem chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Thanks for entering! Great job!
texasbella chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Thank you for your submission, I really enjoyed it! :)

mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Wow so different I loved it thank you
earthsista chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I found this fascinating! Really cool.
rubybeachdragnfly chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Very interesting! I hope you continue this, would love to see where you take it!
sisik chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
What a wonderful story!

I usually don't like vampire stories but you took a common premis and made it into a story so interesting and exciting. You built a fascinating that I would love to read about in a full-length story.

I really liked your invention of the old/new vampire race, it clogs up a lot of holes in the original canon and allows to take the characters to very intersting places.

I would love to see a continuation of this story, you have developed here an amazing conflict- the "normal" vampires verses the Superiors, and Bella and Edward stuck deep between the two camps.

Excellent writing. I'd like to read more of your stories when I'll find out who you are.

Thanks for sharing,



Sorry if there are any spelling mistakes I'm not a native English speaker
Bec Rose chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
hmmm, well. I'm not sure how I feel about this. I did love it when Bella was shooting Edward! Haha love you for that, cos I wanted to do that to him for leaving. Great story, a little too scifi for me, but still good.

3 ya
mmsinful chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
interesting concept and very original. I like it a lot. Thanks for sharing.