Reviews for A Fool's Paradise Quickly Destroyed
heidi chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
excellent, I love love Merthur, congratulations
mia-dcwut-09 chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
This was great and I hadn't realized that loved it
lilithaofsherwood chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Poor Gwen. This was beautifully written.
chorus chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Short, yes, but VERY well written! Great phrasing, word choices, good use of repitition to make the point.

Annnnndddd, it's cute! :) Sad for Gwen, but cute! :)
Pazithia.Gallifreya chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Hiya! Yes - I did enjoy it! A snapshot into their lives all too briefly but enough to get the picture! Nice one ;-)
Beizanten chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
very beautiful!
GoldenAura chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Adorable. Cute. Sweet. "Aww..." worthy. I loved it.