Reviews for The Toa's Apprentice
Toaofwriting chapter 12 . 2/10
This is a great story; I'm really enjoying it and looking forward to reading the next chapters. Also, I don't trust Sebastian...
DaLintyMan chapter 11 . 11/24/2013
Sweet stuff, seeing a good bit of potential for plot twists here...
DaLintyMan chapter 2 . 11/24/2013
First thing I thought of?
It was a test.
AllSpark Princess chapter 11 . 11/15/2013
Very interesting story. Hope you update this very soon.
Princess Unikitty chapter 11 . 11/15/2013
very cool story so far. keep it up.
ZabuzasGirl chapter 9 . 6/17/2013
Update immediately, please!
ZabuzasGirl chapter 7 . 6/5/2013
Update immediately, please!Update immediately, please!
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Update immediately, please!
incessantly18min chapter 7 . 5/10/2013
Hi there! I really love your fanfic. It's quite interesting. I hope you will update soon. Also, will all the Toa's have an apprentice? Or would it only be Cheryl and Matt? Thanks!
The Gentleman Ghost chapter 5 . 12/5/2012
Nice to see you update again. Great chapter chapter as usual. Keep it up.
Shatter Dave chapter 5 . 12/5/2012
Good job! Love the story, the humor here and there, and Cheryl! I didn't catch any grammar mistakes so good job with that! You're a very talented writer and I hope you continue to update
SwordsOfEternalLight chapter 4 . 6/24/2012
? A human Toa? Oh whatever.

Very nice way of describing Mata Nui.
The Gentleman Ghost chapter 4 . 6/7/2012
Hooray for random ice! Very well done! Update soon!
Llewlitz chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
I should have known I would find you here! xD

I read your fanfic a while back on the Lego Message Boards.
Varkanax40 chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Nicely done so far. I've just finished chapter 1. Your portrayal of Kopaka was spot-on.
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