Reviews for Heart Of Scales
ParanormalPinkie chapter 17 . 12/5/2015
This story is absolutely fantastic. Such a rollercoaster, but a believable one. The character development in it is so well done, especially Spike's and Rarity's. You do so well with the writing that I can tell how Rarity feels even without her thoughts being heard. I truly hope that you finish it someday, because it would be such a shame to leave such a brilliantly written tale unfinished.

Thank you so much for sticking with it for as long as you do though, I will most definitely be re-reading this sometime even if it is never completed (I will just have to make my own ending up xD).

Ta ta!
Emeraldpichu chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Honestly, I really, really like this story. it explores characters, their psychology, and interaction in a very meaningful way. Choices feel like they matter and things play out in a way the that feels natural and earned.
Its very hard to find any story that approaches character interaction in a romantic subtext in any interesting, gratifying or even natural way. The fact the romance part of romance matters the least is something that people find surprisingly hard the grasp. The characters, the situation, their mentality that really matters and that a lovey dovey wishy washy farce doesn't have engulf a tale and drag it down to a sea of mediocrity. So I thank you for the amazing story and the fact that the possibility of romantic elements don't have to overtake it and eat the real story alive.
KOG chapter 7 . 6/29/2014
Try reading chapters while listening to On my own by Three days grace. Fits in my opinion.
mareine chapter 17 . 6/10/2014
This deserves more reviews. And I want to slap Applebloom, that scheming little...grrr. Please update soon! :)
El Zorro chapter 17 . 1/17/2014
Your story was wonderfully, amazingly, beautifully, and awesomely Jawsome!
Please do finish, I would love to know how it ends.
Thank you for that Jawsome story.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/3/2014
I've heard that song! Mona Lisa iz sang it it's on my Cd!
NyanRainbowPrincess chapter 17 . 12/17/2013
Gasp! T.T This was a good chapter, but I'm waiting for the Sparity to come back! I feel bad for poor AppleJack though... Was the end supposed to symbolize what happened at the party? This isn't going to turn into a AppleSpike fic, is it? OO Please update soon!
IcyForest chapter 17 . 12/17/2013
This story is very exciting and I love it! Please update soon...
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
i thought she was already in the popular group on the episode where it was twilights birthday
bananabronygamer chapter 16 . 12/15/2013
This story is amazing can't wait for the next chapter
NyanRainbowPrincess chapter 14 . 9/13/2013
Please continue soon! I'm really getting into Sparity. :p Is Ruby ever gonna encounter Rarity?
BikerGirl8000 chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
A good read so far! Excellent, fellow auther!
Karlos1234ify chapter 14 . 9/12/2013
When will the Crusaders learn not to mess with love.
LadySparkle chapter 13 . 7/30/2013
Liking it.
Also, you may be unaware of this but if you look back at the ending of “Secret Of My Excess”, after Rarity kisses Spike the second time and it zooms out, look at both ends of the bridge:

Rarity - You are my hero, Spikey-wikey! - YouTube

There are HEARTS on the edges...
guitarrawr1 chapter 13 . 7/12/2013
Update i love thus story
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