|Reviews for Dylan|
| Me123456789 chapter 1 . 1/3
Is Ketty Nico's bf or Cal's at the end
| lizzie chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
really good plot! good to hear a bit including dylans family!
| Cha-Cha-Cheesecake chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Sweet fic! :D I'm so glad you added the the archive like you said you were
Anyway, analysis time!
Storyline: Great. :D Ed x Paige, though? MY DYLED. MY DYLED! Although, that's just my personal preference so I won't go crazy over that, haha. And you actually made me like Dylan x Harry for once. Good job! I think everybody stayed pretty much completely in character, although Dylan was a tad too screamy. Was she on her period? (I know, I know... totally uncalled for...)
Grammer: No spelling errors as far as I could see. Also, I don't think I saw any gramatical errors, so I was glad with that.
Length: I think it was an awesome length! Nice and lengthy, and didn't stray from the plot and/or waffle on for ages. Good job!
Overall: LOVE IT. Write more soon! :D