|Reviews for Sky's Still Blue|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/26
You got me all worked up and crazy over this pairing but only you and like one other person are writing for it! Gah! I love this story, May is so sexy and so is Jack. She's also just how I picture her growing up, very independent and opinionated but sweet and just wanting to be loved.
| Mnemah chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
I came here for the cover image which is from 5 centimeters per second. I stayed because the story was great!
| Fading Butterfly Wings chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
I. Loved. This. Your delicious descriptions, Jack's moral dilemma, May's frikkin' sensuality, everything about it was simply wonderful. Jack and May are slowly starting to become a favorite pairing of mine, and I have you to thank for it :)
| The Rune Reverend chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Interesting, to say the least. Not a big fan of smoking myself. (My wife wouldn't have dated me if I had) But it had an interesting point and it made that point very well. Good work!
| Apples Parachute chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Oh my. Wow. This is beautifully written. Both the narration and emotions were well detailed. I love it. Frankly, Ive been coming across not-so-good fanfics everywhere and it just simply intensified the excellence of this through comparison. Keep up the good work! Im rooting for you :)
| AmyAddict1 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
This was a very good read for me. I'm finding it difficult to speak into words exactly how I've enjoyed this story. I loved it (that's a basic way of describing it :P). This was simple and yet not too simple and flowed nicely.
I spotted one mistake. It's in the third line where you wrote "Jacks" instead of "Jack's." But otherwise the story was great. Keep up the writing.
Good luck in the contest.
| Atomitrox chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Pretty interesting premise. It would be cool to see you write a longer story on the idea of an older May.
btw, I would capitalize some of the words in the title if I were you.