|Reviews for Rise|
| Psifonian chapter 12 . 1/9
I was actually thinking about this story the last few days and wishing I could know what you had in store, not realizing that you had updated the story over a week ago. What a pleasant surprise!
And what a thrilling conclusion to the siege of Knothole Glade! The strategy of the White Balverine was so fascinating to see play out, and you really captured the exhaustion our heroes must've felt in trying to bring it down. Very concerned about where things go with Klessan - but I will say that I'm glad that our protagonists are getting their fair share of scars in this journey.
| SwordsmanofS chapter 12 . 1/2
Glad to see this story continue to get updated. Good job on conveying the tension of the lycan attack. Also good on you for ending it here and not drawing it out any further than it needed to.
Interesting spot your Klessan is in. Considering the temperament of your main character, I can see Jack spending the next chunk of his free time trying to find a way to get her a new arm, one way or another, through magic. I do note that we've had a long trip one on one with Duran to build up his character and backstory, and Whisper is pretty well established in canon and throughout most of this fic. So I guess the next arc is time were Jack and Klessan deal with her sudden disability?
Wherever you decide to take the story next, I'm just glad to see it still has life. I imagine when we get new Fable news this year this category will probably see more traffic, so congrats on being a pioneer! Have a wonderful New Year, may inspiration and creativity be your constant companions.
| The Thermophage chapter 12 . 1/1
You did a really good job making the Balverines seem like a terrifying threat. Nice work.
| Ericdragon chapter 12 . 12/30/2022
That cliffhanger. We need to know if klesson survives
| Xyan99 chapter 12 . 12/29/2022
This chapter was great. I love the Will advancements, there were a few spots had me thinking Klessen was done, pacing was terrific.
Still quite possibly my favorite story on this site. Thanks for all your effort.
| timewastin chapter 12 . 12/29/2022
Fantastic stuff! So damn good. Thanks for the update.
Hope you had a great christmas and best wishes for the new year.
| Nightwolfs chapter 12 . 12/29/2022
Welcome back! Quite a delight to see this story updated.
| Overlard chapter 12 . 12/29/2022
Fucking Fantastic! Thanks for the chapter!
| Maximusowrath chapter 1 . 12/4/2022
I just finished reading this and your other marvel series and there all very high quality! Keep up the good work!
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/11/2022
Greatest fanfic I have ever read. I cannot wait for the next update!
| Psifonian chapter 11 . 9/4/2022
Holy hell! I don’t know what you were doing in your long sabbatical, but you brought back with you a ferocity I haven’t seen in many writers, both here and elsewhere. This chapter was the best one yet! I had to read it twice before I posted this just because it was that. Damn. Good.
I cannot wait to see how the siege plays out.
| timewastin chapter 11 . 9/3/2022
Sooooo good. Thanks for the update!
| Upon a Pale Horse chapter 10 . 8/5/2022
You know I think this was one of the first fanfics that I ever found. I was stunned to see it updated and I ended up re reading all of it. It is such a good story,and honestly I'm kind of inspired to re play Fable. I do hope that rumored remake of the game does happen.
| The Thermophage chapter 10 . 6/7/2022
Well I'll be. Rise still going after ten years. Great to see it.
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/4/2022
Great to see this updated