|Reviews for A Raven's Story|
| Telboriel chapter 11 . 5/31/2012
Excellent chapter! I cried reading this one too. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work!
| Melissa72 chapter 6 . 5/31/2012
*sigh* Good fic so far...I like your writing and the concept of not only reading the letters but Hermione taking the time to flashback to certain events.
The only bummer is the pre-marital sex...and after just being asked to court Victorian style? Sex outside marriage cheapens the relationship. If you truly love someone and want to give your body completely to them (as the body during sex does) than the rest of you should do likewise...money, future, mind, heart, possessions, etc...otherwise it's a lie. How can someone in sex be saying with their body "I give you everything" and yet the rest of you say "ummm...but not a, b, and c". *shakes head*
Sex deals with souls...every time you are intimate with someone, they take a part of your soul. Sex is sacred and powerful...and thus must be protected in marriage by promises and vows. How can you say "I love you" and yet treat the soul without the respect it deserves?
Sadly, I'm not going to finish reading your fic b/c of this...but I would like to say that you DO have a gift for writing...and to encourage you to seek out what love truly looks like:) Love protects, honors, sacrifices, and is a complete self donation to the other...it wants only the BEST for the beloved...and waking up after sex, afraid the guy you just had sex with might leave you, isn't love.
Keep on writing...and thank you for sharing the gift God gave you with us:)
| xpage394x chapter 11 . 5/30/2012
This chapter is immense. I love the 'meow by the way' line...mmm I can hear Snape say that lol. Beautiful. Keep up the wonderful work. xx
| MissFine1997 chapter 11 . 5/29/2012
Just want to say that I really am loving thus story. It is heartfelt and dramatic all in a fabulous way. These past two chapters have been so great in an angst type way that sometimes I find my cheeks flushing and eyes watering. Great job, I can't wait for more.
Miss E. Fine
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape chapter 11 . 5/29/2012
| onecelestialbeing chapter 11 . 5/29/2012
oooh you have my emotions all over the place but now they're good tears!
| Telboriel chapter 10 . 5/26/2012
Wow what a chapter! I cried, not only for the loss of their child, but for the way that Severus has pushed Hermione away and has been so cruel to her. Severus can be so stubborn and hard headed it seems. The bright side is we know that they patch things up eventually. I am loving this story. Please keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
| harrys-girl-4-life chapter 10 . 5/24/2012
How incredibly sad. I was forewarned, yes, but still. Wow.
| notwritten chapter 10 . 5/21/2012
That was one sad and painful chapter. It was good. Keep smiling. :-)
| Mature Me chapter 10 . 5/21/2012
Severus is so cruel :(((
| wyndnfyr chapter 10 . 5/21/2012
I don't even have children but this chapter sure as hell made me cry. Not necessarily bad, it takes a good writer to be able to instill emotions into the reader. Brava :)
| xpage394x chapter 10 . 5/21/2012
Beautiful and moving. Congrats on your 100th review! xxx
| KG-613 chapter 10 . 5/21/2012
Holy hell. I cried the whole chapter. So good. Like, ridiculously amazing.
Ps what's the story behind crooks and Poe hating each other? I feel like there was a little side story I missed.
| Salinia chapter 10 . 5/20/2012
Such a sad chapter!
Can't wait to read more!
| onecelestialbeing chapter 10 . 5/20/2012
awww my heart broke at this chapter