Reviews for Jinxed
Crow's Talon chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
As a steadfast reader of "Dent", I particularly enjoyed reading this piece. You write the dialogue exchange between Harvey and Gilda very well, and I'm impressed by Gilda's characterization. She's a character I see sadly little of, which is surprising, given how important she is to Harvey as a character. Your use of sounds was very well done, and I really liked the way you captured the bittersweet tone of this story - after all, we all know how this ends.

I really enjoy the way you write Harvey. You capture him pre-Two-Face very well, especially how sure he is that he will bring down Moroni and his feelings for Gilda. Your dialogue has a punchy, beautifully written sense to it that makes it a real pleasure to read. The sense of bittersweet irony and optimism of Gilda and Harvey in this story is wonderfully done and adds a great deal to the story.

I really enjoyed reading this piece, and I'll have to get back to writing "Dent" soon, since I'm enjoying it so much. Excellent job!
Chef the Fifth chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
I feel so sorry for this couple. Life just seems to suck for the Dents.
Twinings chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Any hope for a chapter 2? :P