Reviews for High Flying Adored
MeoTheRandom chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
Just rereading this for the umpteenth time.
I think this one is my favourite, the lines are all absolutely brilliantastic! I love the line about the damned souls and how Yen found that really cool XD I'm only on the first chapter right now as well! Yep this one is definitely my favourite! X3
BlackDragon741 chapter 6 . 5/15/2013
:DDDDD This was awesome! You make Dastardos so interesting and complex in all your stories, I love it! I also enjoy the love-hate thing between him and Avalon. She's such a cool OC. Great job, as usual :)
Veneesla chapter 6 . 12/7/2012
Aww! I've always liked the idea of Yoto and Storkos together! This was awesome! As for my views on who gets Avalon, I can't really decide. I mean, I used to think Dastardos was really annoying and creepy (aside from his awesome hair) but your fanfics have made me do a complete turn around and turned him into my favourite character in VP! I like Yen's personality, the quiet, reserved type. I see waaay too many Yoto's in real life so seeing someone like Yen is an amazing change of pace and I've always been drawn to his kind plus he's my favourite of your OC's. He reminds me of a character I read in The Three Door's Trilogy by Emily Rodda called Sholto. I can't decide who I want to get Avalon!
Kateland106 chapter 6 . 11/6/2012
I LOVE this story. I mean absolutely adore it! I know I'm new to the site and all, but I can't get over these six chapters. I found it especially funny with Bart and Jardineo at the inn. I almost cried when Storkos said they couldn't be together, but it was so sweet when Yoto said he could wait for her, it seems you can only find people ike that in stories and movies now though. I also see a great potential for Avalon and Dastardos to become great friends as well. Now, to go read some of your other amazing work...
Tiigerliily chapter 6 . 5/29/2012
Woww, Magnar's actually pretty violent! :P

I like how Storkos' and Yoto's relationship is working out. They're cute together! :D I'm glad Avalon's okay... Pester indeed isn't much of a threat, especially when he's drunk! XD

I love the fact that Avalon still wants to play 'Draw Something' with Daz! :D I still don't see them as a pairing to be honest, but they'd make the most amazing friends! :D

Overall, this chapter was well-written, as always. :) It was a great ending to the story, and I can't wait for your next one!
Can't Decide a Pen Name chapter 6 . 5/28/2012
Oh my God... just Oh my God...

My dreams have come true. Yoto and Storkos FINALLY got together :D And it was soooooo sweet! I mean, when they first kissed, I was like "OH MY GOD" and then when Yoto kissed her again, all demanding and everything, I about fainted from my fangirl instincts. OH MY GOD HE KISSED STORKOS :DDDDDDDDD

*Ahem* now, with the other parts of the chapter...

God, Pester, you are an IDIOT. I mean, I know you were upset, but when you are in the middle of a crime, you don't just sit there and drink a lot and get yourself as drunk as hell. Well, at least Storkos had an easy time kicking his ass xD

And Dastardos... what he said to Avalon about saving her... I never actually thought that he would say something like that to ANYONE. Him saving a woman? Jesus... I guess we have some AvalonXDastardos coming to us real soon I bet ;) Another one of my all-time favorite couples...

Anyway... This was so worth the wait :D this was just amazing, and I about died from all the kisses. I mean, my heart was starting to shatter when she started to talk about how they couldn't have a relationship, but then it was all okay after Yoto went on about how he would gladly wait for her :D So sweet it almost hurts!

I really want to smash Langston open for trying to ruin such a moment. I don't care if he knew or not, I'm gonna kill him. DELIVER YOUR OWN DAMN EGGS.
Can't Decide a Pen Name chapter 5 . 5/18/2012
Hey Sorry it took a while before I could review! I had a bunch more finals this week... BUT NOW SCHOOL IS OUT YAAAAAAAAAAAAY! No more finals for me

Anyway, down to buisness...

You just made me smile like a doof. I got so excited when I read this-

"There's this one gardener…Dustin, I think his name was…stupid kid, hate him more than I hate most people. He had a Mallowolf named Peter. I smashed it, looked him dead in the eye, and said 'Sorry, Peter petered out.'"

Oh my God, you mentioned one of my characters :D Not even that- you picked the dumb one too for the correct situation :D Dastardos does hate that kid... actually, almost everyone does... AND EVEN MENTIONED A MALLOWOLF NAMED PETER. I actually forgot the names of most of his Mallowolfs xD oh man, you know Dustin so well :3

And Dustin would cry. Then he would be pissed. Then he would cry again. Then he would eat a tub of ice cream and fell better :P (That was so random) anyway... I just wanted to say that that was amazing, and it made me very happy.

Anyway, to the rest of the story

So, it was Yen who wrote the little haiku huh? I should have guessed... I knew he liked to write poetry too D: WHAT IS HAPPENING TO ME? I can't foreshadow like I used too...

But he likes Avalon? ... I don't know how to feel about that... I really don't... I guess it's kinda cute, but in a way she's older then him... but he's 19 so I guess it isn't that weird...

xD but the masturbating thing with Potato was HILARIOUS. OH MY GOD. I love pervy jokes dirty jokes for the dirty mind xD

Damn Avalon... I am so proud of you :D You stood up to Dastardos, and you didn't get hit! I think I sensed some romance between the two as well... (fangirl moment)

Oh Jesus, I hope Storkos and Yoto get there soon! After Pester asked if Dastardos had raped her, I am scared to see what he has planned for Avalon... *Shudders*

Gosh, you can tell I am so exicted right now :D No more school for me *Happy dance* okay, now I am done... for real... um... bye xD
Tiigerliily chapter 5 . 5/17/2012

Gosh, I LOVE Yen's crush on Avalon! :D She's pretty much out of his league, that's what makes it so cute! :D I like Potato and Cid too, they're great piñata-characters! :D

The growing friendship between Dastardos and Avalon is amazing! :D I'm glad they get along well, it makes Avalon's time in the cage more bearable and it's a good addition to the storyline of course! :D I wonder if they'll keep seeing each other after this story...

That scene featuring Jardineiro was awesome. I liked how he said he lost both of his sons... poor Seedos! :P The way Storkos hugged their family and said them goodbye and stuff was nice too - I like how you hinted her extra concern for Seedos! :D

By the way... I'm glad that Leafos likes StorkosxYoto too. :D
Can't Decide a Pen Name chapter 4 . 5/6/2012
Oh my God...

Oh my God Storkos kissed Yoto on his cheek...

*Outragous fangirl scream*

xD Okay I'm good now...

AHHHHH How I missed your stories :D I loved how Yoto was fantasizing about sex with Strokos when she was right there xD Oh lord...

And I have no doubt that Storkos has beaten up Pester before. No doubt at all.

xD But oh my God to Bart... slipping condoms into Yoto's pocket? Dude... your messed up then I though xD

And I'm glad Yen found Cid :D Sure, he had to steal Patch's medical stuff, which I think is illegal, but he saved the pinata :D

And Dastardos and Avalon are playing the games still... i don't know who's winning, but I think they are pretty much matched xD

I have never played those before though :O I feel like a loser...

Anyway, this was fantastic, and I seriously cannot wait for more :D
Tiigerliily chapter 4 . 4/30/2012
Great chapter! :D I don't even know where to start...

Well, first things first, Yoto and Storkos are getting cuter and cuter and cuter! :D OmG, Storkos actually KISSED him! :D I'm happy for Yoto, haha! :P

Dastardos and Avalon are developing an interesting relationship as well... I like how Avalon's getting all curious A LOT! :D

I felt bad for Leena at the part with Gigi! It was a great scene, though! And I LOVED Jardineiro and Bart's arguing! :D

OmG... those two have COMPLETELY different opinions on sexually active teenagers! :P
Shinzoku chapter 4 . 4/29/2012
I'M SORRY BUT I AGREE WITH JARDINIERO. Holy crap, if I wasn't laughing enough at Avalon and Dastardos' games, I don't know what I was doing while reading the end. I seriously cannot breathe right now.

On a different note, I must say that Yen is really cute. Helping out a pinata like that. Sometimes I even wonder how exactly he is related to Yoto. It just...baffles me. XD

Things are starting to happen now I can't wait for the next chapter!

Can't Decide a Pen Name chapter 3 . 4/20/2012
Hm, I thought Dastardos and Pester might have been smart enough to take her alert system away- but I guess not.

xD Oh man Dastardos. Don't EVER call a woman fat. Fat women take that VERY seriously, and Avalon (who I know is NOT FAT) can't help that she is very curvy xD

And Maxime... The fact that she actually thinks about Dastardos' penis size is actually... kinda creepy xD

And Petula should know better then to listen to Carrie. You don't know what comes out his mouth. You just don't. Besides, Dastardos couldn't rape a person if he wanted, knocked out or not xD

And Eddie... MAN UP. I love you, but DAMN you need to calm down and grab your shovel xD Or at least give it to someone who will go up there and help Storkos and Yoto, even though I KNOW they can do this :D

And one last thing- Pester, unless if you want to face the wrath of a hormonal, teenage fangirl who has nothing better to do with her life then think of ways to torture her least favorite characters, then I suggest you shut up and never call Eddie a pansy again. You DID fall for his trick anyway.

Anywho... this was just AWESOME :D A wonderful break from studying and taking tests and cramming every little thing we learned this year :D I really can NOT wait until the next chapter, and I want to know who the haiku was from, because I KNOW Yoto can't write poetry to save a life xD
Tiigerliily chapter 3 . 4/17/2012
Nice chapter! :D Yoto and Storkos are cute together, and so are Avalon and Dastardos, in a way! :D I think the two of them'll get along together, at some point! :D

Those Seedos and Leena moments were ADORABLE! :D They'd make a good pairing I think, I remember Leena having a MAJOR crush on Seedos in A Different Look! :D

Gosh, those girls are such idiots when they gossip! :P I love them though - especially Petula and Fannie, for some reason. :D

This was a great read, keep up the good work! :D
Can't Decide a Pen Name chapter 2 . 4/9/2012
xD Oh goodness Yoto... Well, no matter what everyone else says, I believe in him :D Yoto, you can guess her bra size later!

Oh man... I HATE reporters... they are so annoying and in your face XP

Man, poor Leena... I hate seeing little shy girls cry ): Don't worry, Avalon will be back soon! Storkos promised!

And Yen... Even though I love you a lot... SHUT UP. No need to be a downer in a situation like this :(

And... I really am curious about what Pester is making now... But I know you won't tell me, so I will just have to await the next chapter :D
Tiigerliily chapter 2 . 4/9/2012
Nice chapter! I like everyone's despair in the beginning (in a completely non-sadistic way! :P) and I think Storkos is a GREAT public speaker! :D Ah well, I guess that comes with being a super hero!

I love Yen! I don't think he's a pessimist at all, rather a realist... I like the fact that even SEEDOS thinks he's weird, though! :P But now that I think about it, those two could become good friends... can't they?

Wow, Pester seeping through information about Dastardos true identity is soooo evil. THAT'S ONE BITCHY MOVE PESTER! D:

I wonder if Avalon'll be able to put the ends together... Daz is twenty-six, him hating Pester is 'mutual', hmm... :P
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