|Reviews for HOTD, The American Front|
| Kilo 6 chapter 6 . 2/20/2013
I like the story already, but you do realize only the President, Secretary of Defense, and the Joint Chiefs of Staff are the only one's who can authorize a nuclear strike, right? Also, Five-star general is a wartime rank, just like Fleet Admiral, Five-star general (USMC), etc. Seriously, look it up on wikipedia.
| Deity of Insanity chapter 23 . 1/8/2013
Good chapter. Tom's moment in the bar while changing his bandages was amusing. The bridge collapsing will prove to be very interesting.
Keep it up,
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 23 . 1/1/2013
Epic read. :)
| Deity of Insanity chapter 22 . 11/28/2012
I liked this chapter. The first part told us what was happening throughout the country and what was being done. The latter effectively and entertainingly continued the story while leaving a cliffhanger, which I believe is a good thing. It'll make us want to get back to these guys. Good chapter.
Keep it up,
| beastlynerd chapter 22 . 11/27/2012
| Thisguy15 chapter 21 . 10/15/2012
Great job, sorry I haven't reviewed, I havent had the time
| Probably Lucky Athena chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Scars, tattoos, or piercings: earings bellybutton ring
Primary Weapon:Cane sword
Backup Weapon:Kitchen knife
Physical Advantages:being short shes really sneaky
Physical Disadvantages:talks alot and is kinda clumsy
Location at the beginning of the Outbreak:her house in willow springs
Background story (lengthy and descriptive please):kathrine was always the shortest in her family her mother moved to willow springs when her older sister got kicked ouuta school now shes dumb willowsprings all the away from her friends and her grampa who was teaching her some fighting moves at least she still has her video games NOW a zombie outbreak? her dream come true
Family: Father (living or dead):Chris Hallmark Died in the army
Mother (living or dead):Amy Hallmark (dead)
Brothers (living or dead):jamie hallmark(living)
Sisters (living or dead): Hannah and Grace hallmark(one dead on alive)
Reaction to other OCs:always makes friends easily hates preppy girls loves gamer guys
Anything extra?:Personal quest to fine her 9yr old brother and her 21yr old sister
i know this is late BUT i would be delighted if somehow you can look past that and add me in since well i never knew this story exsited till now
| Deity of Insanity chapter 21 . 10/9/2012
Good chapter. Odd that Alice died so quickly after her introduction. Good work with Seamus.
Keep it up,
| Guest chapter 21 . 10/6/2012
Finally Cowboy. geez took ya long enough.
| Allycat chapter 20 . 9/30/2012
I just started reading today and one question did you notice you have to Alice's that do not speak. Update soon.
| Spirit of the Blue Jay chapter 20 . 9/8/2012
| Deity of Insanity chapter 20 . 8/14/2012
Sorry for late reviews, phone doesn't allow me to do such a thing anymore.
The previous chapter was quick and straight to the desired point and there's nothing wrong with that.
This one was also straight to the point. But both were well done. Good job. Keep it up.
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 20 . 7/27/2012
| GravityPush chapter 19 . 7/21/2012
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and was dying for an update. I liked the character interactions and the dangerous situation that sprang up. This made my day! Can't wait for the next update. :)
| WolfPrince95 chapter 5 . 7/10/2012