|Reviews for When Wishes Come True|
| SoaringOverTheSea chapter 14 . 2/27
Love your story, very interesting idea... But I thought that traveling to India would be a lot more than 8 hours. And another thing was that how would Kishan have the dress specially repaired for Madison when he didn't even know she was coming to India.
Anywho please update!
| Tiryn chapter 14 . 10/22/2013
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I want to know how the hell Lokesh keeps on ruining everything .
| Dawn chapter 14 . 8/22/2013
I really like the story.
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/17/2013
| EmmieKBull chapter 14 . 7/5/2013
Really really good! This story is one my favorites and probly one of the best! You capture the personalities of the characters so well! You probly hear this a lot but update soon and fast! DON'T ABANDON THIS STORY!
| okamigrl2013 chapter 14 . 6/22/2013
Why haven't u updated in 3 MONTHS! I've been stressing over the cliffhanger for a million years! (Okay, it's a bit exaggerated, but can u blame me? It's a good story, and I get antsy) But seriously, please update. I want to know more! Makes okamigrl happy! _
| Jessesgirl123 chapter 13 . 5/7/2013
VERY GOOD! love it! wow 13 chapters! you are an amazing writer. keep it up!
| Ipe chapter 14 . 4/30/2013
My review love, love for ur storrrryyyy! :) keep on writing! Your Updates also love for me :D keep on improving your writing, u will get better and better (ps. I love ur writing already, plus ur entertaining personality shines through)
| Leprecaun woman chapter 14 . 4/5/2013
Thank you so much for writing “Girls vs. Boys”. As you know I and my friends really enjoy your work. Like everyone else, my favorite part was the cliff hanger with Lokesh. I also like how this chapter was a little longer than the rest and really gave great descriptions of Madison’s new room and her clothes! Hope you update soon and that you are having a good Spring.
| Countrygal98 chapter 14 . 4/4/2013
I love this! Keep it coming!
| Ace'nAzule chapter 14 . 3/23/2013
Lazy. You started from the third book so that you ended up not knowing about the pheonix, the war, Durga, the truth about Damon (very sad, it would totaly ruin your storyline), and Lokesh. And you don't know about the Ocean Scroll, what happens to Kishin (as i said, it would totaly ruin your storyline), and who Kelsey ends up with. Although I do enjoy your story. Fare thee well.
| cosmo mermaid chapter 14 . 3/17/2013
Hey there! As always was glad you updated and by now you know how much I and my friends enjoy your story. Like VW this was one of my favorite chapters and I did notice it was a bit longer than the rest. :)
The conversation between Madison and Kishan was funny and entertaining as usual. sounds like Madison hit the jackpot with her room in India. The whole incident with Kishan repairing her Sari was very touching. Nice unexpected detail and helped show the true affection Kishan has for Madison. As the story continues will be interested to see how Ren and Kelsey fit in.
Finally, loved the cliffhanger! Adding some suspense and action to the story in the form of Lokesh is a great idea. enetertaining yet freaky conversation with all his threats at he end. it really does create a cliffhanger situation because you know there is going to be trouble and conflict. with that being said do hope you update sooner rather than later. thanks for entertaining us this past year with this truly well done story!
| Kishangirl1368 chapter 14 . 3/13/2013
Amazing! I loved it!
| Virginiawriter chapter 14 . 3/12/2013
As stated before we are all really enjoying this wonderful tale. For several reasons which I will explain during this re IWW this chapter was my favorite. liked the detail of your description of Madison's bed room. very opulent. also the carefree fun she and Kishan had while making dinner was entertaining as well. the banter/chemistry between the two main characters is soooo well done and developed. I also like how this story is so well connected. How touching Kishan remembered to have Madison's Sari given to her by her deceased Father repaired. That was all the way back in Chapter 8 if I recall correctly? do I get a cookie that detail? :)
as I was reading he chapter I was thinking what a fun and light hearted chapter. Then, out of nowhere the phone call from Lokesh! I was surprised and the terror Madison felt seemed to come alive. Great writing. the absolute creepiness in how he threatened her. smart, evil and creepy just like he is in the book. the four questions that she ask herself at the end of the chapter give the reader a clear insight into what your character is thinking and how frightened she must be. Such good writing and such suspense at the end.
Let me once again conclude with a truly felt "thank you" for taking the time out of your day to entertain your fan base. update when you can but I understand you are busy with school and a life! Have a wonderful Easter break and am sooo looking forward the next couple of chapters. I know Madison will fight back, and fight back hard against Lokesh.
| Tiger Warrior09 chapter 14 . 3/12/2013
Nope no DONT LOVE THE CLIFFHANGER! This is my fav fan fic and I re read it all the time. I can't even tell you jaw happy I was to c it updated. I thank you and beg you to plz add more! And soon!