|Reviews for Skin Deep (Hiatus)|
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/3/2013
I love scipio!
| Erudessa-gabrielle chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
| saturday.conspiracy chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Your writing style reminds me a little bit of Funke's and is very easy to read. You write dialogue very well (I feel like I've said this before). The only thing I would suggest is a little more backstory on what Scipio and the others have been up to and how their relationship with each other is now. Did Mosca and Riccio ever forgive Scipio? Has his relationship with Victor developed more aside from them just working together? Little things like that could help make the characters more realistic. Just a suggestion.
Looking forward to future chapters!
| saturday.conspiracy chapter 3 . 5/11/2012
I like Rosaline's character so far in the story and that her relationship with Scipio isn't moving too fast. The plot is starting to get interesting, so I'm looking forward to seeing how her meeting with Scipio goes. Good job!
| Pica Britanica chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
An excellent start, I like Rosaline already. :)
| Rose.Massimo chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Fabolous! It enchanted me. It sounds interesting. I want to read the next chapter. Please update soon! :D