Reviews for When revenge becomes betrayal
amariecoughlan chapter 23 . 4/11/2015
Please put an ending to this story. Is McGee leaving or is he stay, I need to know. I love this story
Guest chapter 5 . 1/27/2015
Why are you making all the characters act like 11-year old drama queens?
marthapreston4 chapter 10 . 8/18/2014
wow I not sure I believe he would just lie to mcgee like that its like he was betrayed twice. He did choose making tony happy over tim
KlausMikelson chapter 22 . 6/23/2014
please tell me Tim gets a new team, I mean no offense, but Tony's a jackass, and immature. Tim needs to lead his own team so that he can become more confident in himself, and grow in knowledge and skill before possibly going back to Gibb's team
Guest chapter 23 . 5/18/2014
Please finish this story love it can't wait for next chapter
KlausMikelson chapter 23 . 5/15/2014
really? Tim needs to move on, I have nothing against Tony or Ziva, but those two need to see Tim working with another team in order to realize what it means to be a team
Kilmeny17 chapter 20 . 4/19/2014
Crossing my fingers DiNozzo does not mess up...
Kilmeny17 chapter 13 . 4/19/2014
That was a good ending sentence.
Kilmeny17 chapter 12 . 4/19/2014
Wow this is so emotionally powered it made me cry a little. Well done.
Kilmeny17 chapter 11 . 4/19/2014
He got offered his own team? Awww that is so awesome he totally deserves it.
starfire25 chapter 23 . 5/23/2013
Wow. That was an interesting story. And btw i dont think you were bashing characters. I think its a good character study. I like it. Now, i want to know if mcgee stays or not.
221BelieveInSherlock chapter 23 . 8/1/2012
I thought that this is pretty good :) I'm loving it! Please post another chapter asap?
camry72 chapter 23 . 5/5/2012
Don't worry about DeVore504 or her reviews. I've seen her around. Really doesn't give good reviews. Also litters her reviews in profanities. Some of the other authors and reviews can probably vouch for me on that. Who know's maybe you've seen her reviews. She truly annoys me really. At least she logs on.

Great job can't wait to read more.
Gottahavemyncis chapter 23 . 5/4/2012
Tim giving Tony a free pass, again. Tony refuses to commit to changing.
wandamarie chapter 23 . 5/4/2012
great work keep up the great work
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