|Reviews for Oof|
| linda chapter 1 . 3/1
good i loved it man
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
Short and sweet!
| CrescentCity chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
My absolute facorite one shot!
| 5FreakyFingers chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
| sakura chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Awww:3 so cute plz can you make lemon!
| DragonsCrescent13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
That was very sweet. You need to make the transition from Ayano's point of view to Kazuma's point of view more clear because it was very abrupt. You could type, in bold print, Kazuma's POV, so then the reader does not become confused.
| AnimeFreak2110 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I Was like AWE the whole time lol i liked it !
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Aw! I love this! Write more! :D
| Booklover2526 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
its cute! aww!
| Anon D chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
This was really good I'm disappointed in the fact that I didn't read it sooner. Very cute very well done a little ooc for Kazuma since when is he "sheepish". But Ayano's character was well done. Overall though it was really cute. Loved it :)
| saika seiru chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Awwwwww...That is really very cute...Truthfully I am not even supposed to read stories,but this one reminds me of the awesum moments I spent with my boyfriend before marriege..
though now i am married to him for a year,his love hasnt changed a bit...I am preganent now...the due date of our baby is may 26:):):):):)
(I love kazuma and ayano even though i am a adult and believe mostly everything they show...)
KEEp writing dear,and hope you achieve great goals in your life...
| monzepelmoon chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
cute, this should be continued just because I would love to know how Kazuma explains himself to Ayano.
| saaya1324 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Really awesum! I liked it a lot...I pity Ayano*grin* pooor girl...
Its gud to read this since it is my 4th year anniversary with my BF!
puhleeeeez keep writing..
| Sil Arion chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Nice fluffy one-shot! Personally, I really liked it and you portrayed Ayano and Kazuma pretty well in the such a short scene that doesn't really give all that much time for action so much as just love. Anyways, nice job!
| Enoon chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
that funny do another ! please i really like :)