Reviews for Really, It's Just a Cold |
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![]() ![]() Ignore my last review; my computer is an idiot XD Anyway, I thought you did very well! I was even reading it in my head with the Lorax's voice, which is a sign that you got his personaility down well. I had to laugh a little at his lack of knowledge on human lifespans, though it does make sense. I wonder what his reaction would be to finding out many humans don't even live to 100. And I think Once-Ler's in his early twenties... Once again, in love with your story, and eagerly await more! :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it was pretty decent, I love the last part "Tell time what?" lol, maybe the next chapter should be on the Lorax's POV and have the Once-ler not wake up, like be unconscious and weak. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been eagerly awaiting all day for the update-I feel satisfied with the result! :) Getting to see what's going on in the Lorax's mind about the situation, that was very nice. Needless to say I was chuckling at a few parts. I will still be eagerly awaiting the next update! |
![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS. PLEASE, for my sanity, UPDATE ASAP :'D |
![]() ![]() I don't know if it's just my computer but...ch 4 isn't showing up... ;_; |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story so far :) I can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was SO CUTE, you completely captured their personalities. I mean, like, in the kinda-scary-crazy-awesome way. I could literally hear their voices saying the lines, it was amazing! You are a great writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ug! I love this but I am waiting patently for more. Please keep going |
![]() ![]() awesome story! Keep going |
![]() ![]() I had to pee very badly when I saw that you'd updated, and I toughed it out and read this chapter before sprinting to the bathroom. That may sound weird, but it definately means I really like your work. :D I'm in the same boat as the Lorax; Once-Ler's got something going on, something bad. I can't wait for more! Seriously, I check this thing about once a day 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I have to wonder what's going one with Once-ler... Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! Wonder if you're going to have the Lorax go to the city looking for Once-ler's family, be shocked when they seem happy that he's dying, and have to go to seek out a doctor himself, maybe get so angry about the obvious mistreatment and in his wrath intimidate the family into bringing a doctor and acting nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I love this! It's exactly the kind of story I was looking for! And you've written it so well! poor sick Once-ler, I feel bad for him- but I love The lorax's concern for him...and the animals too. I hope it's nothing too serious. Please please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i've been too lazy to log in and properly review this, but my heart nearly dropped dead when i saw that it only has seven reviews! not nearly enough, of course. this is such a wonderful story; granted, i have something of a horrible addiction to sickfic, but this is very well written. i love the thought you've put into the lorax as a character- while the beanpole gets plenty of characterisation, it's hard to get the self-righteous jellybean down, and i think you've got him down pretty good! he's just the right mix of fatherly and gruff, i think, but you can definitely tell he cares about the once-ler. i really especially love the incorporation of "trees get sick and then die" and him assuming oncie's gonna die, haha. poor guy, he's kind of ignorant for being so all-knowing. please continue this, this is one of the best lorax fics i've seen on here thusfar, and i'm very excited to see things from the lorax's point of view. |
![]() ![]() This is just too cute. I really like the idea of a fatherly Lorax. He's just so snappy and yet sage at the same time :D Anyway, I'm curious as to whether this is just a cold anymore; I imagine the Lorax might just flip if it turns into pnemonia or something . |