|Reviews for My life as a pokemon trainer|
| perfect oblivion chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Very nice story so far, though there are quite a few grammer mistakes, though nothing illegible. It would help if you were to get a beta reader, and if you want one I'm available. Interesting thing you have going with ash being your half brother and all. I like how you got Cyndaquil, though I'm biased seeing as Cyndaquil is my favorite starter hands down, and getting beldum was quite interesting as well, wasn't expecting a pseudo legend this early in the fic.
One last thing though. Jirachi, Zekrom, Darkrai, Kyurem, Deoxys, and victini are not minor legendaries, and cannot be used. To get a proper list on what legendaries I consider minor, go to bulbagarden, and search up the battle subway, then look at their banned pokemon list. Whatever is in it, is a legendary you cannot use.
I look forward to seeing this fic updated soon, and keep in mind my offer to beta read for you. And it's not Crimson overlord it's Perfect Oblivion, how the heck did you mix that up?