Reviews for OUR STORY
ILoveAnime89 chapter 6 . 7/17/2012
Love it update again soon..
HermioneandMarcus chapter 5 . 4/11/2012
fantastic chapter and i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can write it please and thank you
saddlebrat chapter 5 . 4/10/2012
i loved this story at first i wasn't sure because i read the summary and i thought it would be another story about Jax trying to get Tara back, and hurting another girl in the process but i was so wrong! i loved the first 5 chapters and cant wait to read more!i hope you update soon!
HermioneandMarcus chapter 4 . 4/7/2012
fantastic chapter and i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can write it please and thank you
HermioneandMarcus chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
fantastic chapter and i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can write it please and thank you
guessallyouwant chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
No thank you.
Spy Glass chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
You need to work on the writing structure of your story. I'ts impossible to read double spaced with no paragraphs. Very difficult format to comprehend.

I also don't like wasting the first chapter just to describe the female. Blend in her looks, background, etc into the story by showing rather than telling. Also, you don't have to tell the reader 'Jax Teller POV'. Just by the way you write, the reader will be able to tell whose POV you're telling from. It doesn't give the reader credit in figuring it out themselves
demonicseer chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
Live it keep it up and update soon please
lederra chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
Not a bad start. There was as far as I could see only one grammatical/spelling error but it happens to all of us at some point or another. I think that Tara/Opie are a cute couple and though normally I would not put these two together, in this case I think it works. You have got Jax's arrogance down to perfection, lol. The only other things I would point out is you really need to put a disclaimer on the first chapter, stating that you do not own any of the SOA characters and only any OC's that you have created. Also you don't need to put everything about your OC in the first chapter, it is nice to gradually learn more about them as the story proceeds and not at the beginning. Other than that it was a good start and I will keep an eye out for your next update