|Reviews for The Warrior's Way|
| ozlady80 chapter 27 . 12/10/2013
| ImmortalMyrddin chapter 25 . 8/18/2013
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| Chat chapter 11 . 8/11/2013
Whoa! *fans self* that was hot! :)
| Chat1 chapter 10 . 8/11/2013
What an awesome story!
| aceflygirl chapter 27 . 8/1/2013
Every couple of months I come back and read this. I loved the movie and this story is the perfect addition to it. Please don't ever take it down. :)
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/6/2013
wow that was such a great chapter! i felt so jealous for her too! some guy so has to hit on nicole and make tommy jealous! lol!
| Vorazlov28 chapter 26 . 2/25/2013
This story was great! I probably should have commented more when I was reading, but sorry to say I kind of got rapped up and I just had to finish. I literally read through this whole thing in between all my college classes. It was just so good!
| southernlove87 chapter 27 . 2/15/2013
Loved Loved Loved this. This has got to be the best Warrior fanfic I've ever read. The editing was great, writing fantastic, and the dialogue was spot on. It had me giggling, smiling, and even holding my breath at times.
Maybe it was almost too picture perfect, but you know what? Sometimes it is nice to not have some crazy tragedy happen in a story, just to have a "story". For me, this is exactly the the happy ending Tommy Conlon deserved at the end of "Warrior." I swear I am obsessed with that movie...and now Tom Hardy.(My husband would prob be jealous if he knew how infatuated I was) Mmm that man, sheew. Anyway, just wanted to let you know you have made my last two days it took me to enjoy this and I was not disappointed in the least with any decisions you made in how things went in the plot line. You are an awesome writer. Keep it up and I will look forward to more of your work ;)
| southernlove87 chapter 14 . 2/14/2013
Love it! omg you are so awesome
| southernlove87 chapter 9 . 2/14/2013
Wow! That was perfection! Ok you are awesome at this. This may be my favorite Warrior fanfic so far
| southernlove87 chapter 7 . 2/14/2013
Woohoo! I am really getting into this :) They have so much chemistry. Tommy is perfect, exactly how I think he would act after the movie. Great job so far, I am enjoying every minute of it.
| Sera22 chapter 27 . 1/25/2013
Alright, where do I start? I really loved your story and I feel that I have a huge speech to give to you.
Your plot, your OCs, your view of the life of the Conlon's, your writing style were very good, very endearing. I liked your unique style of writing a lot, especially when you described speeches and not only using quotation marks. Very stunning.
Despite your story not having an actual climax and therefor being very predictable, I was hooked from the beginning and could not stop to read. Because it was so wonderful! Almost a fairy tale! Balm for the soul. I did not hesitate to believe in Tommy winning the second Sparta! For only one second I considered him losing the contest but dismissed it almost instantly, it appeared to be surreal, not fitting in your true romance.
Consequently I am not hundred percent persuaded of your version of Tommy. You described him the way he COULD be, almost too good, too romantic to be true and so I eventuelly caught myself thinking of your possible last chapter where you cruelly let your OC wake up from her coma, sitting next to him in the casino again, being completely alone and with the knowing, that everything was only a dream! OMG! Well, my fear turned out to be wrong, you can imagine my happiness about your epilogue.
What else? Your OC: I liked her fit of jealousy a lot! I sympathized with her and would have felt the same.
Actually your OC was very likable, believable. You made it easy for the readers to comprehend Tommy falling for her. I imagine her clearly being Tommy's type that turns him on. I liked her plainness, she was no fighting queen, no shabby old flame, no she was very special in her very own way. Perfect.
I do not object to stories rated M, I do like them when written well, and therefor I was amazed about your style to describe the obvious. I did not encounter a good story rated T here lately. Many arthors try to upgrade their story using porn scenes whenever they get the chance in their "plot", describing them in a way you would not be able to find on the very very special sites!
So your depiction was something very valued for me, not only because every reader was able to understand in any case what exactly the two lovebirds were doing... No more words needed.
And the last part of my review will be some criticism about the length of your story. I am certain that your story could have had around 35 or even 40 chapters, if you had taken your time and had divulged more (for example the interaction between Tommy and her nephew, Tommy and his brother, Nicole and Tess...). I mean sometimes I felt rushed, ushered quickly and quietly to the end of the tale. And I was left feeling anxious about... I do not know!
Do not get me wrong, the story is good how it turned out, but I am bound to feel there could have been more of it just to make it a perfect story.
Despite from that, that is one really commendable, adorable, romantic romance containing everything that is needed in a good fairy tale.
| seein.stars92 chapter 27 . 1/11/2013
I LOVE this story, its seriously great and ending makes me wanna cry from happiness! :)
| Stacie chapter 27 . 1/5/2013
I loved this story. This is Tommy exact how I imagine him. I can totally put myself in Nicole's shoes.
I didn't want it to end...
| forrestdanford chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
I absolutely LOVED The Warrior's Way. I couldn't stop reading!