Reviews for The Fine Line
unlikelymember chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
This is a great story. It seems to be open to continuation. I look forward to reading more, if that is in the plans. Regardless, I thank you for sharing this. It was quite enjoyable.
dihenydd chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
I could have sworn I'd reviewed this before?

As per usual riveting writing, gripping story, left wanting more...
poorlittlerichgirl chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Wowee this is as hot as all your writing seems to be :) Intrigued to see if/how he manages to win her over... hope you continue/update soon!
poily chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
are you going to do more chapters on this story? i like it and i want more )
britchick77 chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Wow.

...yeah, that's all I can say.
peshiosha chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Nice o)

Wish there was more p these two r fun!
cat5050 chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Great little "piece" I see why it garnereded the popular vote in the contest. You know I can feel there's a LOT more to this little tale. Would you consider making it more?
Agrable chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Loved it!
1853kaz chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Ah! Liked it! Sounds like a "to be continued" there, right up until you say, that's it! Congratulations on your win :)
spechell chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
the end?
TwilightMomofTwo chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
This was quite good and I noticed it's not marked as complete. Are you thinking of extending this? I'd like that.

Thank you for sharing.

TMOT :)
AdonicaSS chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
That's it? That's it? arghhhhh

Marriage consumated. Oh, baby, consumated with a capital C.

Hoping that E is just a step or two behind her. hehe

Love that you found the inspiration to write for the contest. I miss you.

xx
Esmi76 chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
No more! Lol this is awesome :)
twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Loved this. Great job on this.
Twiggalina chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Wonderful stuff!

I hope you write another chapter to this.I'd love to read about Edward not letting her go or something like that.

Happy Easter! (if you celebrate it)
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