Reviews for The Fine Line
MarilagML chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Love how they both benefited from the deal. I'm guessing it's what you call marriage with benefits? ;-) lol
LLH88 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Great one-shot! Please think of continuing.

Lynn
Miss Owl 12 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Please, please, please tell you are going to continue this!

This is magnificent! Absolutely loved it.
lemonbutt chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
That's it? PLEASE continue! This is so freaking good!
Nerdette Love chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
I loved this

It was a really great idea. I never expected Bella to be the one with a temper, I was expecting her to be the one with the secret.

This was different and exciting to all those "happy ever afters" there are out there and I loved that about this.

It was all very unique. Are you going to extend this one-shot which I assume it is? Or not? I would love to read more because I'm very eager to discover anything further developing between Bella and Edward and if she'll give in to his seduction.

Very suave!
meadow11 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
ooohhhh, that was so good... any chance of continuing this?
alli62 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
I know it's a one shot, but it's a great start to a story, it's actually begging to be continued. lol.

I love all of your stuff and miss your writing.

Congratulations on second place.

And I say, keep going.
JGroIsMyEdward chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Oooh, I love this. Sounds great already. Can't wait to read more!
they call me red chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
I like this edward can read Bella's mind. Lots of detail and hot. So far so good.
Meadowgirl552 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Kris great writing and story as usual, I know its a one shot but loved the premise along with the great portrayals of Edward and Bella, I do hope this will continue,,,
Angeldolphin01 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I love it.
OPOSOJOJ chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
This story is awesome! Love primal Edward and unwilling Bella...well almost unwilling ;)
Rissa129 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Sooooo good please update!
theshadowofyoursmile chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
so intense
TheBellaFanatic chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Congrats on your 2nd place win with this story. Any chance that you will continue on with this story? Or is this just like a one shot thing for the contest?

I'm fascinated the most with the fact that Bella does not want to be with Edward. So the wanting to watch her slowly change her mind (while she goes through it kicking & screaming *giggles*) is what I would like to experience. Along with, of course, to experience more sex scenes with these two. :D

Love this story concept & hope that you will develop it into a bigger story for us.

XOXO B-Fan
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