Reviews for The Fine Line
paragod chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
That can't be it! Come on that was HOT and a beautiful beginning to a story. I need more... I want more... Please it just cant end like that.
rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Very nice
missylb chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Love it looking forward to reading more of it x
dreamiedreamer chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Interesting. Is this just a one short or a proper story?
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
That's it? No more. *waaaaaaaaaaa...* Love it. I need more. :) *cue big puppy eyes*
NKubie chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
That was hot! No denying it.
trueform chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Just what I needed. Enjoyed walking the fine line with you.
vertigo33 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I'd love to read more of this one. Continue?
keyecullen chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Nice o/s. Did I miss what Edward was getting out of the marriage? Did he just want her? Either way, great o/s. I enjoyed reading it.

Keye
veri4ka chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Dayum! That was hothothot. I love me some angry sexy times for sure :D

Please say you'll continue this! :)
ella701 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I like this Edward and Bella...can't wait to see how they cope within their new arrangement! Then add the rest of the family too...excited about this new fic!
littlelizruth chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
are you going to keep writing this? because that would be so awesome! loved it!
SleepingBeauty247 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
You write the BEST lemons! Ride and now this...soooo good!

Loved it! Left me wanting more, much, much more!
Nonita chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
More please...Can't wait to more!
fashionplate chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
So much promise... I hope you write fast ; )
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