|Reviews for The Fine Line|
| moniquecullen chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Whoa. That was pretty hot . I notice it's not complete. Are you going to expand it?
| glitterr chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I reviewed when it was on the anonamous fic list, but just in case you don't see those reviews...I LOVE THIS FIC! The story line has so much potential, and I hope you continue this into a multi-chap story ;-)
| WutheringHeights1975 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Eeeeeeeeee...I have never thought that this could be yours. I've read it last week. I should have suspected, knowing how i liked it but by then, i didn't know you have an entry for the contest.
Atoooort na lang Palm Sunday ra ba jud ron.
Congratulations, Kris! As usual... very hot gihapon! Puede sumpayan? Hehehe.
| biblepam chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
enjoyed reading your story. Thanks muchly for sharing and congrats on placing second.. awesome
| pnkats chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Omg that was too good. Please make this into a story?
| Erikajo chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
That was so awesome! More, please? ;)
| barburella chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
That was hot. Thank you!
| Danie Carly Cullen chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Amazing I seriously hope u continue this story
| Luvtwismut chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
That was magnificent! No wonder you placed! If you have any desire to continue I'd love to read more!
Thanks for writing!
| Kathym90 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
No thats not it! I want more! Lol this seems like such a different and unique story
| afmtoo chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I want more. That's all
| RPattSinner chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Yay you're continuing it! D