Reviews for The Fine Line
moniquecullen chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Whoa. That was pretty hot . I notice it's not complete. Are you going to expand it?
glitterr chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I reviewed when it was on the anonamous fic list, but just in case you don't see those reviews...I LOVE THIS FIC! The story line has so much potential, and I hope you continue this into a multi-chap story ;-)
WutheringHeights1975 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Eeeeeeeeee...I have never thought that this could be yours. I've read it last week. I should have suspected, knowing how i liked it but by then, i didn't know you have an entry for the contest.

Atoooort na lang Palm Sunday ra ba jud ron.

Congratulations, Kris! As usual... very hot gihapon! Puede sumpayan? Hehehe.
biblepam chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
enjoyed reading your story. Thanks muchly for sharing and congrats on placing second.. awesome
pnkats chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Omg that was too good. Please make this into a story?
Erikajo chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
That was so awesome! More, please? ;)
barburella chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
That was hot. Thank you!
Danie Carly Cullen chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Amazing I seriously hope u continue this story
Luvtwismut chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
That was magnificent! No wonder you placed! If you have any desire to continue I'd love to read more!

Thanks for writing!


Kathym90 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
No thats not it! I want more! Lol this seems like such a different and unique story
afmtoo chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I want more. That's all

RPattSinner chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Yay you're continuing it! D
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