Reviews for The Fine Line
keyecullen chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Nice o/s. Did I miss what Edward was getting out of the marriage? Did he just want her? Either way, great o/s. I enjoyed reading it.

Keye
veri4ka chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Dayum! That was hothothot. I love me some angry sexy times for sure :D

Please say you'll continue this! :)
ella701 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I like this Edward and Bella...can't wait to see how they cope within their new arrangement! Then add the rest of the family too...excited about this new fic!
littlelizruth chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
are you going to keep writing this? because that would be so awesome! loved it!
SleepingBeauty247 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
You write the BEST lemons! Ride and now this...soooo good!

Loved it! Left me wanting more, much, much more!
Nonita chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
More please...Can't wait to more!
fashionplate chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
So much promise... I hope you write fast ; )
Thaigher Lillie chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
This was awesome. It's been a while since I got back into reading fanfic and i'm glad i read this one. it's great!
moniquecullen chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Whoa. That was pretty hot . I notice it's not complete. Are you going to expand it?
glitterr chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I reviewed when it was on the anonamous fic list, but just in case you don't see those reviews...I LOVE THIS FIC! The story line has so much potential, and I hope you continue this into a multi-chap story ;-)
WutheringHeights1975 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Eeeeeeeeee...I have never thought that this could be yours. I've read it last week. I should have suspected, knowing how i liked it but by then, i didn't know you have an entry for the contest.

Atoooort na lang Palm Sunday ra ba jud ron.

Congratulations, Kris! As usual... very hot gihapon! Puede sumpayan? Hehehe.
biblepam chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
enjoyed reading your story. Thanks muchly for sharing and congrats on placing second.. awesome
pnkats chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Omg that was too good. Please make this into a story?
Erikajo chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
That was so awesome! More, please? ;)
barburella chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
That was hot. Thank you!
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