|Reviews for First|
| Pixie is Jelly chapter 1 . 3/28
I like it. I like it a lot. Annie was only in it for a bit and she felt more real than most of the lengthy story OCs I find. Crane's characterisation was flawless - you can already see where he's heading (and I loved the troglodyte insult - such a perfect nerd moment).
I don't think I can fault it ...
| Fell4 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
That was... hmmm. I don't know if I like that girl or not. She's sort of really hilarious. Hate that freak Carl though.
| ZenyZootSuit chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
LOL at the end! Nice job!
| Kabuki1 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Dude, best exhibit ever! I'd sneak off to check it out too. And poor Crane. Nothing ever seems to go right for him, no matter how well he plans. I can see how he'll later associate Batman with that jock. Nice work!
| Sylvia1 chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
You're probably getting sick of these reviews, but this also was awesome. I can't blame Crane either, I would totally want to check out that exhibit over whatever else they had planned for the field trip. Though he can't even enjoy that without problems.
| BlatantBookworm chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Good story... i don't know what else to say here.
| Twinings chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I want to hear more about that security guard.