Reviews for Internal Yearning
ilikeya chapter 28 . 10/8
I. Loved. It :D
ilikeya chapter 5 . 10/8
I'm actually loving it .
sashaann88 chapter 28 . 9/12
LOVED this!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10
*Growls* l love to inflict as much pain as possible on 'The boy who needs an good beating' and the pack of weasels, especially THE WEASEL...
Guest chapter 28 . 9/9
*Chuckling Evilly* Here's hoping that the bloodtraitors and the pug get what's coming to them...
Firnlambe chapter 28 . 9/5
great story...would have liked an epilogue, but since the characters core traits were (mostly) spot on ill survive
Lost in a magic realm chapter 28 . 7/10
Thank you for sharing this story. Draco was wonderful and dreamy.
Guest chapter 28 . 6/21
This story needs a sequel
Rankin de Merthyr chapter 4 . 6/18
Yeah, I'm reading only the first sentence of the story and I can totally still follow where the story is going.
Rankin de Merthyr chapter 2 . 6/18
Too wordy. While detail is nice, the flow of conversations goes out the window.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/15
I've been trying to read this story for ages now...but i cant seem to get passed the 2nd chapter...its seems interesting...but Draco calling Hermione 'Mia' just puts me off ot...
fanficfanatic000 chapter 16 . 5/10
A bit sexist when Draco refers to the women he's slept with as sluts repeatedly. Doesn't that make him a man whose himself. I can't believe hermione buys that crap about other women being sluts but she's the kind of woman one would marry. Just propagating the belief that it is alright for men to sleep around, but it isn't the same for women
PgTnr1 chapter 28 . 1/22
Wish there was more, it is difficult to find a well written veela story,
Guest chapter 28 . 1/12
at the end of the day this is just a typical poorly written fic honestly just shit
TashaRose chapter 28 . 1/8
I would have loved for it to go on longer, but it was a good ending too. I was glad to see those three get their just deserves for their actions against Hermione.
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