|Reviews for Most interesting|
| ArkieR chapter 3 . 10/17/2013
This is hilarious and so cute! :DDD Love it!
| Mage333 chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
Please write more this is wonderful. I would greatly appreciate the fact of you continuing this story.
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
yessh!q personally i luv this couple theyre adorable and it drives me crazy that i have to wait another season! aww *glomps*
| NightDreamer567 chapter 3 . 6/19/2012
Heehee i got all giggly at the end :3 MORE please!
| eric peterson chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
i definately like this couple razer's so conflicted and aya just wants to show him comfort can't wait to read more chapters about these two please write them soon.
| Protecor Of Men Roy chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
That Was Very Romantic.
| SanDavis687 chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
Cool :) I find this story Most interesting so far.
| ivyknightfire chapter 3 . 5/21/2012
More please! These r really good! :)
| eettnnlovie chapter 3 . 5/17/2012
This is my favorite chapter so far but I love all of these stories so much. Please keep on writing them!
| Cat chapter 3 . 5/17/2012
| Zephyros-Phoenix chapter 3 . 5/4/2012
Ok, much longer chapter here so that's good in my books. I like that you brought Hal in and gave him an active role in Aya and Razer's developing relationship. It would have gotten a bit boring if the focus was solely placed on Aya and Razer. And given their characters and the development they have yet to undergo, neither would have even initiated any form of blossoming romance. Hal's the resident flirt and romantic so it makes sense that he'd be the one to offer advice.
The apology at the end was rather sweet, but you gave Aya far too much emotion than she has at the time "In Love and War" happens. She doesn't smile, at least not yet. She's still learning emotions and shit and even with a humanoid face, she's rarely ever shown out of a flat monotone expression. Same thing goes for "teasing curl" and the wink. She'd had to have learned that from Hal and even then she's not much of the emotion expresser.
It was very out of character, not just for Aya, but for Razer as well. Now, I'm not saying that the fangirl in me can't see Razer saying "Lady Aya" or Aya saying "my Razer," because I can totally picture that. The problem is that neither of them would say that where they are now/where and how far into the series we are. Neither Aya and Razer nor their relationship has developed enough for that. This is similar to the previous chapter. You need to remember how far developed a character is and how that affects the dialogue and expressions.
| Zephyros-Phoenix chapter 2 . 5/4/2012
Ok, so we got a bit more. I'll be honest, I was under the impression this was originally just a oneshot, so I'm liking more content.
Now, the conversation was very pleasant and natural. Both Aya and Razer were well in character and I could imagine it playing out in my head. I do wish that your chapters we a little longer however.
One last thing: I have a problem with Aya holding his hand. Not that it isn't sweet - it's super adorable for the pairing and makes my inner fangirl swoon, but where does she learn that hand holding is a sign of comfort? She bases her actions on what she learns from Hal and Kilowog and neither have displayed the hand holding comfort sentiment - so far as I remember in the series thus far.
| Animelover Inf chapter 3 . 5/3/2012
Nice, very nice. I think you keep the characters in character very well.
| NinjaSheik chapter 3 . 5/1/2012
| Animelover Inf chapter 2 . 4/27/2012
Nice, very nice.