|Reviews for One Time Should Have Been Enough|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
You might want to have someone go through your stories to double check your grammer. Some meaning of sentences were jumbled due to grammer.
| BlooperLover chapter 13 . 6/18/2012
I just finished reading this story and I love it! Although Graham does have a last name. Humbert. Graham Humbert. And also there are a couple grammatical mistakes in your story so it would help if you got a beta reader
| Queen of Tortall chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
You have a good plot line, but the dialogue sometimes overwhelms the actual plot. Also, you're missing punctuation in a lot of your dialogue, like: "No I am taking Henry" should be "No I am taking Henry." and '"I won't let you leave" I pushed away.' should be '"I won't let you leave." I pushed away.' Other than that, good job!
| BrittanyLS chapter 12 . 5/16/2012
What a nice way to end the story! Here's to next season
| lightmylumiere chapter 12 . 5/16/2012
Confused. It was good, but you need a sequel to clear that up a little. I'd like to hear more about the twins though!
| SnowandJames4eva chapter 12 . 5/16/2012
Awww that was the perfect way to end it! So sad its over though...anyways I loved it girl:) fingers crossed for a sequel;)
| lightmylumiere chapter 11 . 5/12/2012
Twins are good
| Supernatural-Girl17 chapter 11 . 5/12/2012
Love this story and chapter so far! Hoping to read more of this story later! Hope so and can't wait! :) 3
| SnowandJames4eva chapter 11 . 5/11/2012
OMG SHE'S HAVING TWINERS!:):):):) hehe the last is so Emma;) loved the chapter! Update soon!
| Supernatural-Girl17 chapter 10 . 5/8/2012
Love this story and chapter so far! hoping to read more of this story! hope so and can't wait! :) 3
| lightmylumiere chapter 10 . 5/8/2012
| SnowandJames4eva chapter 10 . 5/7/2012
THAT...WAS...SO...BEAUTIFUL! I'M CRYING! I KNEW YOU DIDN'T KILL HIM! I JUST KNEW YOU WOULDN'T:D BY FAR MY FAVORITE CHAPTER! UPDATE SOON:) AND LOVED THE 3 UPDATES IN 1 DAY!
| BrittanyLS chapter 9 . 5/7/2012
I just want to see Emma happy!
| SnowandJames4eva chapter 9 . 5/7/2012
3 words: I hate you...
Not really but I am going to strangle you...I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU JUST KILLED GRAHAM...
| lightmylumiere chapter 9 . 5/7/2012
So confused. Fluff down drain.