|Reviews for Men and Angels|
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/25
Goodness how I cried while reading this! Well-written and heartbreaking, but so sweet!
| Amber Ice Fox chapter 8 . 2/17
I really enjoyed reading your story! It was honest and heartfelt.
| Salome Maranya chapter 8 . 2/10
Really, thank you for this. I hesitated at first to read it, it is such a sensitive topic for them and asfdhj it woukd take so much effort for a great delivery. I was floored, so wrong. I am just happy that they found happiness both ways.
But, I hope Father and the others don't succeed in that timeline. How that turns out is for another story.
| The King in White chapter 8 . 2/8
This was something pretty different - I don't usually go for temporary AU swaps, but I thought it was well done.
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 8 . 1/19
so it ends! Ah, the sadness, the angst, the woes of these two boys/men...
Hnn, I'm glad the alternates found Hoenheim though. I wonder how they'll work out the homunculus thing in this alternate timeline.
Interesting story, if really really dark. :P
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 7 . 1/19
I still kinda smirk when they call him "uncle ho."
AHHH what'd you doooo... what'd you dooooooo...
ed's innocence, and all the older ed/al's angst... *siiigh* wonder how this will conclude. :P
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 6 . 1/19
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 5 . 1/19
"[al] might GIVE UP TOO MUCH..." AHHH YOUUUuUuUuu
Don't know if that was intentional or not, but that... Oohhhhhhh
And you stuck HOENHEIM in there...!? ahhhhh
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 4 . 1/19
WHAT HAVE U DONEEE...
I don't know if I can handle all this angst... D:
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 2 . 1/19
What's gonna happen!? oh noes! This situation...
| BlobO'Puff chapter 8 . 1/17
A very wonderfully angsty and emotional story! Haha
Overall I think you portrayed the characters well and nuancedly.
However I felt that you "told" too much and "showed" very little, especially those inner dialogues in brackets. While your writing was good but lacking in this aspect, the plot in this short (as in occurring for two days kind) story was very well done!
Thanks for this great story!(:
| Miyu Hinamori chapter 8 . 1/17
Welp, you made me cry and stay up late to finish this.
Hope you're happy
| Guitar Amateur chapter 8 . 1/16
Such a beautiful story.
| Anon chapter 8 . 1/12
OOHOHHHHHHHH MYYYY GODDDDDDD
DO I CRY OR SMILE
AM I SAD OR HAPPY
THE WORLD MAY NEVER KNOW
| Everwild chapter 6 . 12/25/2014
Those poor boys are going to return so traumatized...!