Aw, that was so sweet.

I loved this story so much!

Very good story. One suggestion: bring the angst in earlier and make it a little dramatic because if not then it gets a little boring. Cant wait for sequel!

Awww, I loved it! The wedding was really beautiful. :) Thank you very much for this story. )

I'm sad it's (almost) over... but I loved it! It's good that Jack now really knows how Ennis feels, that he felt the fear, too. It was also cute. I love it when they share their mutual feelings for each other. :)

Very good chapter! The ending was so sweet! Good job!

I hope Ennis is finally done with the choking out. He has gotten to the point where he seemed like such a wimp. I was glad to see that some of the people that gave them a hard time before were more enlightened about their life. That should help him become more of an independant person. Not be so surrounded by fear...Janice

awww i like this and ia m goign to miss thsi story sooo much but great job with ti i love how all teh idiots realized how wrong they were

oh wow damn poor ennis i love this though ugh i just want to hug them all though

Left it on a cliffhanger, very nice

I am so concerned about the freaking out problem that Ennis can't seem to overcome. He knows the odds and chances for them having some kind of problem. Why is it that he cannot seem to think in terms of himself getting into trouble? He seems to only worry about Jack. Its as if he doesn't realize that he is just as vulnerable, if not more so, than Jack is. He is for sure more likely to stand out in a crowd than Jack. I don't know why he just jumps the shark, all, the time. thanks for the chapter,, janice

Oh dear, that doesn't look good, does it? But I'm sure they'll work things out. They belong together! )

Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

I have to say, Ennis comes off as too needy in this chapter. I mean, Jack really should get his Masters. But other than that, it's good! There needs to be a little more tension though...

Well I am sorta kinda not liking this chapter. It made Ennis and even jack in some ways seem like girls. Ennis came off as very needy. He was flipping out, over Jack maybe going for his masters degree. I think that someone with the potential to better themself in life, should do so. Unless they have reasons not to do it for some solid reasons. Like illness, or finances, or some such reason. But if the person has the ability to do it, other than just a jealous worry about the present relationship in their life. I don't have a lot of respect for the one giving it up. I don't have even as much respect for the one that is asking them to give that up. It is just going to in the long term, if not in the short term cause a co-dependant relationship. Which will be a death knell for the entire thing. I think they should have spent at least a bit more time, before making such a life effecting decision. I appreciate the fact that they love and want each other. However I think if they are going to become strong mature, and secure adults, they need to come together as two complete parts, the decide to be together. Not to be together because of need. I say it will never work, in the long term...sorry. Thanks for the chapter, but that is my opinion.. I am very much against a co-cependant relationship.

While I think it's sweet that jack took ennis over his education, it's still a rather dumb move.

aww that was soo awww i am glad they worked it out betweent hem again hahah great