I love this story so much!

Ennis and Jack are so cute together.

Cant wait for more!

Ah! Now the storyline is getting rather interesting. *gets a bag of popcorn*. Now the fun begins:)

Good Chapter! Can't wait for more!

Ahhhhhh! Update soon! I loved it!

I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!

oh wow just nice i like it alot just damn it was great haha nice with them almot getting each other right there

Oh my god the sexual tension. That almost kiss, that was so hot. This is getting good. They need a good long chat now.

This was well written and flowed. You tend to have a lot of dialogue in your stories but not in this one, the balance seems just right. I'm enjoying it.

Update soon,

DS

Nooooooo! Why would you do that to me! They were soooooo close! Now I can't wait, hurry and update again? I have put so much emotional investment into these characters! They need to be together!

Very good chapter! I really want them to hook up soon.

P.S. If u ever get ice cream flavored jellybeans DON'T EAT THE CHOCALATE JELLYBEAN! They taste icky :(

Aw, poor Ennis and Jack. I just watched the dvd of Brokeback Mountain and it was really sad. I loved watching it though.

I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!

Well they done the deed. At least in their own dreams. It was sweet and wonderful. Both of them more than loving it. It left

Ennis feeling confused. Jack feeling longings and frustrated. They should get together soon, while their emotions are at this high pitch. Wow they would set the bed on fire.

I loved how you wrote them both inside their own heads and thinking about the same things, but scared to say it out loud. It was seamless and very well written. I love this story and am loving the way you are posting it so quickly. I figured that Ennis would be receptive to the feelings, but not quite understanding it. I think they may have to have a middle man, (wo-man) do some talking to them both. Seperately. thanks again Janice

Hey! It's me again! Haven't talked to you in forever! I wanted to say that, this story is awesome! I love it because it's soooo AU! It's not like anything I ever read for brokeback mountain! So yeah, hurry and get them together? I'm really excited now!

-EricaLynn

You're having far too much fun with those dreams girl.

Poor unfortunate souls, they need something to bring them together, Please let it be soon, because they're both going to go crazy.

Good chapter.

Thanks for sharing,

DS

Hey, Kathryn. Great job so far. I don't usually read these kinds of stories, but I am totally digging this. Keep up the good work. I hope you're not planning to use Alma in the story. I never liked her. Update soon.

i love how they are both idiots haha i feel for jack though wlel i feel for them both and i cannot wait for more

That dream was a bit steamy wasn't it? Poor Jack. I'm interested to see where this goes really. He's gonna have to sort himself out isn't he?

Poor Ennis, oblivious as always, or is he?

Good chapter,

DS