|Reviews for Crossing Swords|
| Chicary chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
My favourite part had to be the kid Atem. It's so rare to see him out of his usual 'serious' characterization that it added to the fun of this story. The tension between Mahad and Set was just right, enough to leave the rest to the reader's imagination.
| Sierra's Darkness chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Best. title. ever. *A*
Did I tell you that I love this? If I didn't, I AM NOW.
Telling the story from Atem's (innocent) point of view was a fantastic idea, especially since he doesn't seem to comprehend the, ahem, unresolved sexual tension there. xD Anyway, you did a great job with this and I'd wish you luck but you totally don't need it. 33
| Dusty Llama chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
That's a clever title, my friend, very clever indeed ;]
Atem is such a mischievous kid! And Mahad has always been such a stickler for the rules, couple that with smarmy Set ... great dynamic!
Good luck ~
| harinezumiko chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
Cheekily sweet and aggressively sexy. Me likey.
| OxEyed chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
This was adorable! I really liked that we get to witness the relationship from Atem's eyes, and that most of the tension between them is about who is closer to the future Pharaoh. Good job and good luck!