Reviews for The Sky Is Painted With Red
JustARead chapter 34 . 3/29
There's definitely more to her story
JustARead chapter 33 . 3/29
Crazy
JustARead chapter 32 . 3/29
Danger?
JustARead chapter 31 . 3/29
Awwww
JustARead chapter 29 . 3/29
Make up
JustARead chapter 28 . 3/29
Whoa
Guest chapter 54 . 3/29
trying to type out a comment on my iphone appears to be difficult for me since I krep posting before I'm finished with the comment. my previous post wasn't finished, so hopefully this will work. anyeays, as I said, I'm glad they are finally together. one thing I do want to say and I do stress it's my own opinion so it may or may not be correct. but, imho, when they finally meet again, it seems so we knew they would make up since they love each other, but I felt things were not said esp by bella after his absence. yes, im sure bella is relieved and happy to finally see him but, If I was bella I would b pissed as hell too. I would have lavished him with all the love but at the same tine give him a piece of my mind for staying away for so long and couldn't even stay during the change...no matter how guilty he felt, this wasn't just about him but bella too, the 2 of them, both of them together... he didn't give her a thought as she changed and to control her bloodlust, instead, he was selfish and left all bc of his guilt. he made the whole thing an ordeal for her instead of something to celebrate as she finally became like him. just that once again, bella seems almost apologetic...now that she's a vampire, I had hoped she would have a spine, one strong enough for her to stand up for herself. but all she says to edward is that I love you and forgive you ...she can and should forgive him but I would have liked her to at least give him something to think about to really make him realize what his leaving has done to her and to them as a couple. I'm sure they will b fine, being soul mates and all, but at least be honest about their feelings, esp since their markings prob throw out their true feelings , how she really feels/felt. good job!
Guest chapter 54 . 3/29
first of all, I do love that bella and edward are finally together as they deserve it esp edward after all that he had done from the very beginning all for her.
Guest chapter 52 . 3/29
ok, so a lot of my previous questions and comments have been answered. some of the disgust I had for Edward's behavior may be excused but not all. it's amazing that he had been protecting her from the beginning...shows his love and devotion for bella...doesn't mean he can still be excused for all of the intimacy he had with Victoria and others. I thought he could feed from her without being intimate,yet he continued even in front of her no matter it was acting or not. I'm sure if bella did what edward did, he would not be so forgiving . but I suppose I should at least give edward much kudos for his plans of protection for bella. really interesting story...with some name changes and editing, grammar, spellung corrections and some re-write, it may be a publishable story...much luck in your success... btw, I do wish edward was with her during her change and first years...esp since there is no guarantee that change was going to happen without probs, whether she would die and whether she will become a rogue...he should have been with her all along...
JustARead chapter 27 . 3/29
Just when I think he'll change
JustARead chapter 26 . 3/29
So she's not a vamp. Did other donors get the traits too
JustARead chapter 25 . 3/29
Oh boy
JustARead chapter 24 . 3/29
Jake..
JustARead chapter 23 . 3/29
I thought E was supposed to protect her?! Is it another vamp?
JustARead chapter 22 . 3/29
Smh
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