|Reviews for Bound: Divergent from Four's POV|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
Four wasn't first jumper. He was last, actually. It says so in "The Transfer". What a romantic ending to the chapter! :D
| Four six chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
lol... zeke literary "fell" first off the roof coz he ahhhh aweeesommmmeee
| Ananomous chapter 14 . 8/16/2013
OMG! Thank You sooooooooooo much! You don't know how many times I've tried to imagine what Tobias is thinking and you captured him perfectly! You did great! Just look over it for little errors though before you submit it or whatever. I've found a few things like a3 and adding letters to words. Nobodies perfect and i write to so i understand, I've read over my book so many times i might have it memorized! Thank you again for doing this!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
wtf! what the hell is catsup?
i am not even english and I know that!
| DramaQueen127 chapter 16 . 6/30/2013
don't be so sure of yourself Tobias...
| DramaQueen127 chapter 14 . 6/30/2013
| PatchTobiasDimitriandJace4ever chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
This is so good. i can't wait to read more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
greattt girl! i love four personally
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/17/2013
AWESOME! Loved it!
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/1/2013
I LOVED THIS SHIT! OMG MADE ME CRY:)
| Solace Utara chapter 16 . 2/27/2013
| BookwormProblems chapter 14 . 1/18/2013
I just read all of this on one sitting, when really I should be reading Pride and Prejudice as requested by my English teacher, and to be honest. This was probably 100 times better, given the fact that I am a huge Fourtris/Ten shipper. I love how you recreated the situations and, as appose to some other fanfictions, made his thoughts realistic and not all weird. I feel as reader that although I loved it I should give you some constructive criticism, firstly you should check through your work more thoroughly to make sure you have no mistakes. There were a few times when I saw a typo or a missed word and I cringed a little. Second is to put more depth into the scenes, and to finish a scene of with more understanding, by that I mean make it obvious that a certain scene has just finished. At some points it seemed like the two different scene merged and it did leave me a little confused at first. But aside from all that random mumbo jumbo, I really loved the story, and how much you made Four/Tobias love Tris! I'm hoping you've written one for Insurgent because I'm going to go and read it if you have!
| Mrs.Eaton chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
I really, really loved it! I don't mean to be a Grammer Nazi or anything, but I think it's called Ketchup, not Catsup. But, I think you had great detailed and I felt like I was reading another book by Veronica Roth!
| MRA chapter 16 . 11/30/2012
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/27/2012
This is so good! The way you capture the tris/Tobias connection is so perfect... I loved reading what you have... And I hope you write more (even though it looks like you stopped editing this one a while ago).