|Reviews for Harry Potter and The Death Wish|
| Colorful Swirl King chapter 29 . 3/15
You finally get to the part were Harry actively seeks sex and you just stop ARGHHHH! Admittedly the reason he's looking for sex is well questionable but why must you stop here I almost started sobbing cause like I realize how that sounds so wrong... But like Harry's been abused I wanna see him do something cause he wants too (sexually wise)
Sounds soooooo wrong... So yeah please update soon I love your story found it on archive of our own and well was devastated that it stopped at chapter 12 and like on a whim I looked it up on ffnet and was like soo happy to see it has more chapter just to see you hadn't updated in like 2 years... Disappointment... I should stop I'm rambling yeah I'll stop cause like I don't were I'm going with this I mean... I'll stop now
| Lilia0 chapter 29 . 2/23
I still love your story, and I'm sorry for your hardships. Please become better so this story may thrive in updates! :P
| Lexisfightingrobots chapter 23 . 2/19
such incompetence is going to get Harry killed
| Anaelyssa chapter 29 . 2/8
Arrg... fucking angsty Harry... When I started reading this story, it was quite interesting. When Harry decided to take charge of his own life, I was hopeful. But aaaarrrgg... Any proper dark!Harry would have at least Crucioed some spiders or something for stress-relief. This Harry seems smart in academic subjects, but utterly deficient in terms of relationships. Why won't he at least read more books about that stuff since he's so clueless?
Ahem, now that I've gotten that off my chest, I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. Though I really pity the people Harry's going to collect. Longbottom doesn't deserve this. But Blaise... oh how I wish Marvolo could get to him, though sadly, hurting Blaise would hurt angsty!Harry as well.
If I hadn't read that one-shot you have somewhere about Harry and Marvolo's future sex-life, I would be on my knees begging you to not let this story end in tragedy. It's already sad enough. Stupid Dumbles will probably do something to hurt Harry anyways T_T
*Sigh* yes, I know, even the genre is labeled as "angst." Just... maybe please remember not to break your readers too much.
| Lexy chapter 29 . 2/4
I love this story and I can only encourage you to continue, although harry's idea of making slaves of the people he wishes to never leave him is a bit creepy XD, probably a bit extreme, but i can actually understand it (although my mushy heart keeps telling me there should be only fluff in these kinds of stories AND HARRY AND TOM SHOULD JUST PLEDGE THEIR UNDYING LOVE TO EACHOTHER) and i don't think you've made him either too broken or fucked in the head or whatever other people think, and i'm glad for that since it's so hard to find stories where he's not so OOC that my brain is imploding, so i must thank you for that :D. I also want to say that you've already dragged Harry through a lot and maybe you should start actually heading towards healing him (unless the fic's purpose is to actually loosen all his screws, of course).
ANYWAY, sorry for the darned long review but all i wanted to say is that i will support you whatever direction you are taking this fic in and i'll be doing somersaults while awaiting the next chapter D.
| jupimako chapter 29 . 1/28
... This story is ... I'm not sure how I feel about it. I know I like it, but wow it's heavy. I hope you add the next chapter. You've brought us this far into your world, take us deeper into the woods.
| jupimako chapter 8 . 1/28
This story has just sucked me in. I'm loving it.
| My Angel is Falling chapter 15 . 1/22
So good... I know that in previous chapters I cried at how sad it was about Harry. Anyways I thought it all was quite moving and wanted to put that in a review before I forgot to review. Just checking though are you going to quit posting sexual content(on here)? So great chapter great story one of my faves!
| semeDEWI PERSIK x ukeJULIA PEREZ chapter 1 . 1/9
samasama kuudere , samasama berkepala mungil , berdagu runcing , berrahang tipis bgt (gigi mereka cuma 24 sih , taring mereka kekecilan n tumpul lagi , dasar vegetarian , sekalian saja jadi biksuni ) samasama berleher jenjang n sesama kaki kepanjangan dan sesama rambut sebahu berkilauan n sesama pemilik bahu bundar kecil dengan torso yg juga kekecilan , bagian tubuh mereka yg lebar cuma pinggul . jk rowling gimana sih , masa severus pria serem , bukannya cewe malnutrisi . tinggi badan severus sama dengan si
| semeDEWI PERSIK x ukeJULIA PEREZ chapter 1 . 1/9
hore ! severus ultah . hasegaaawa buatin fic khusus untuk yayang severus dunkz . ayo dong . ayo lah . severus kan moe , hasegawa kan keren . berpacu dalam melodi . yeeey . eh . berpacu dalam hitungan waktu untuk bikin fic semeHARRY x ukeSEVERUS . kalau bisa mereka dikawinin sampe bangkotan a.k.a akhir zaman terus SEVERUS hamil dan nglahirin anakanak yg kawaii , mirip ulquiora dan rukia , kan mata harry dan ulquiora ijo , harry dan rukia sesama cebol , severus dan ulquiora seputih hantu , severus dan rukia
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/1
happy new year and merry summer winter my beloved artist on the face of hetalia world . pray you have love and fun and cookies in 2014 . i am curious about you . i bet you are extremely beautiful like wang yao braginsky , polite like matthew williams beildschmit , timid like severus prince snape , gentle and kind like them .
| snarryholic chapter 1 . 1/1
pray snarry . snape x harry . dear my loveliest master of romance fics . please make this the sexiest deepest adorable seme!harry x uke!pregnant!severus from the very begining to beyond ending . i beg you to make them inseparable , always dependant with eachother and together forever . i will love you more if you grant this humble wish of mine . i always think you are cute and kind . i want to send you billions mapple pancakes . or takoyaki if you prefer japanese food . i love matthew bonnefoy kirkland .
| gosakusugishita chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
dear author ,
please snarry .
please make this make this fic a very soft mild gentle cheerful snarry story with a hillarious ending .
snarry is nonexistan in your country and your skill is superb . a gifted pioneer at seme!harry x fem!severus i wish . i sense a majestic potential of snarry from this fic . what a wonderful feeling . domo arigato gozaimasu . as a snarry fan , your work is lovely .
| bybytte chapter 29 . 12/22/2013
OMG! Such an amazing story! I simply couldn't stop reading until I reached the last chapter (it's 1:50 a.m. lol)
I must say that Voldemort is such a bastard that I sometimes hope that Harry won't ever forgive him.
I really want to read the next chapter! It would make my day :D
| addictedXtoXsweets chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
I've reread this a couple of times and it still makes me cry... I'm excited for what'll happen next... So please update