|Reviews for Ever a Surprise|
| Chicary chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Oh, I really like the action-y feel of this and the fact that Kisara made a 'presence.' I feel like Set is very strongly connected to her but she hasn't shown up in the other fics. And I'm glad to see the consensus amongst several other contestants this round that Atem and Mana are integral to their lives as well.
| Dusty Llama chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
This was sad and sweet :]
I like this universe. Kisara is dangerous, and smart ... and Mahad is really upstanding, even as young as he is. I enjoyed it!
| OxEyed chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
I like that you differentiated between the Memory World and Egypt-verse: I think a lot of people forget that what happened in the Memory World wasn't necessarily what happened in the past.
Other than that, I like the depth you gave Set's character, and the way his relationship with Mahad is based on both dislike and respect. This was an enjoyable read. Good job and good luck!