Reviews for Soulless Care
Fran chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
If I had to use one word to describe this fic it would be Potential. The idea is magnificent. The notion that Sam is disturbed by the sight of his brother in pain, that he feels something pulling at him to help despite being soulless and uncaring is awesome. I do think the execution could use a little polishing, but the idea was enough to make this a very good read anyway. I mean that as a constructive critisism - you definitely did a great job and should keep working at it to improve on your writing.
sarah chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
one amazing shot

brilliant work