|Reviews for Heavy Prey|
| ladybugsmomma chapter 7 . 2/14
Eve found Selene. She's an amazing little girl. I feel bad that this is how she lived the first twelve years of her life. It would be completely different if Selene and Michael raised her. Great work!
| SnakeWithWings chapter 7 . 2/14
I love it! Sorry about your laptop, i kn ow what it's like to have bugs and virus's get in the way of writing and other work. The wait is just fine though, a good amount to get us pumped and ready for the next chapter. I really like this one and I look forward to the next update. Happy writing!
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/14
Beautiful. I love how they expected all the memories to be bad but instead it just strengthened her against them. Wonderful chapter, I look forward to the next one!
| ladybugsmomma chapter 6 . 1/11
Great chapter! I'm eager to read the next one!
| SnakeWithWings chapter 6 . 1/11
Well I am very happy that you have returned. I really like this story and I love how you keep it flowing and I love the characters and I love their interactions I just love it all! I think that if you need to take a break every now and then you should. Considering you have a year to finish this I don't think that you'll have a problem finishing it. I hope to see another update soon and I wish you the best of luck with writing. If your ever stuck for ideas just ask someone and I'm sure they'll be happy to help.
| claire3loves3music chapter 5 . 7/31/2014
As heart breaking as this is, it's interesting to see more of eves (horrible) childhood and lida's struggle to distance herself.
| SnakeWithWings chapter 5 . 6/23/2014
I love this chapter!
| DESTINYSARA chapter 5 . 6/22/2014
new chapter ! yay! lots of emotion.
| ladybugsmomma chapter 5 . 6/22/2014
Awesome chapter! Keep up the great work!
| Syradith chapter 4 . 6/18/2014
Ahhh! I've been waiting for this next chapter for so long! This is one of my favorite fan fictions and I'm so excited that you're finally writing more!
| DESTINYSARA chapter 4 . 6/14/2014
Not july yet, and A nice long chapter no less. It's awesome. Thanks for posting.
And you're welcome.
| ladybugsmomma chapter 4 . 6/14/2014
As of right now, I'm just happy that you're back writing the story! Keep up the great work!
| SnakeWithWings chapter 4 . 6/14/2014
Holy Hell! I'm almost couldn't believe it when you updated! I had to just stare at the screen for a moment to be sure it was real. I am so happy! I absolutely love this story and I love this chapter and i hope you continue it! Please!
| DESTINYSARA chapter 3 . 6/12/2014
I like it. Some action, lots of emotion. Any chance continuing it?
| Syradith chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
This story is really amazing! Please continue adding chapters!