|Reviews for Finn's Choices|
| derrickalex1 chapter 4 . 10/10/2012
yo what gives you were supposed to update like awhile ago man/woman what s up
| Mrsleehumanstillinskilayhey chapter 4 . 9/9/2012
holy shmow the litch is back
*dum dum dum sound*
| derrickalex1 chapter 3 . 9/5/2012
please keep it up i have to know wat happens man/woman this has me hooked got to find out wat happens so please keep writing okay
| Caercutta chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Nice! Spellcheck would help smooth the reading experience. Also- "Blah blah blah." said Finn, looking ill.
I really like where you started things. I'm already wondering if she is manipulating Finn's emotions to keep the Candy Kingdom safe. I wonder what she'd say if he confronted her about it. I'm having a hard time imagining Marcelline's top though. Safe for work,I swear /Quotes/CostumePorn
| ray-the-1st chapter 3 . 4/28/2012
nice story man...
I liked the idea
| He23t chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
This is really good!
| The 5th Dragon Guardian chapter 2 . 4/10/2012
| AriTheKitsunemimi chapter 2 . 4/9/2012
this was good keep writing
| notalivezombie chapter 2 . 4/5/2012
Now that was way easier to read and not get confused about who was talking. Glad to see that their a couple now, I hope you keep you word and update more this week.
| Shadown478 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Interesting story idea. I agree though, quotations for speaking are neccesary; makes it easier to understand, and doesnt look sloppy.
| notalivezombie chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
You really need to put some quotation marks in, its hard to tell when someone is talking. It's a really good story.