|Reviews for The hero from a different dimesion|
| ShiningShadow1965 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Great opening I thoroughly enjoyed it . Great job on the writing and plot just watch out on your character dialogue but all in all excellent start. I'm adding you across the board and if you have time can you read my story Rays of Hope thanks and keep up on the great writing bravo.
| Razorslove chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
It was a little hard to read with everything so close together, I had a hard time figuring out who was saying what. But it is a good story.