Reviews for FateDistortion
Stabber OpSig chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
This an interesting concept to retell and reimagine the Fate/Stay Night story. The writing style reminds of something I would see in a Visual Novel which is a fun way to reference Fate/Stay Night's origins; however how you wrote this is, although it gets the essential info across in a fun way, seems rushed in that it could really benefit from just showing events play out with detail instead of summarizing them. I found that for someone like me, who is a casual fan more description would really help me get into myself and enjoy the story.

The one thing that bothers me the most is how the Event Tree branch-off of this story was done, I would have been fine with just the random earthquake but then "pulling a Zelretch" is a bit disappointing; But this is a Fanfiction so whatever.

So far so good and I'm going to read more. :]
Guest chapter 9 . 10/20/2013
Quathis chapter 14 . 10/18/2013
Ok, seriously wasn't what I was expecting from Rider, but she is a surprising person when she wants to be. This will enhance the changes happening, And I am very curious as to just what will happen to Saber with a hungry Taiga there with her cursed sword. Not to mention those three visitors. Yeah, things will likely get very exciting soon. Until next time.
Zaralann chapter 14 . 10/18/2013
Thespurgin chapter 14 . 10/18/2013
vhat a TWEEST!

So Sakura has no servant now... isn't lancer around somewhere?
Heaven forbid Gilgamesh binds himself to her...
FreeWeirdGal chapter 13 . 9/29/2013
Dead Apostle vs Dark! Sakura... Unless the DA just happens to be an Ancestor, Sakura has the fight in the bag.
brunofanofk chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
fate route: prana transfer with a guy that rocked 50 women in one night! lol por shirou
Guest chapter 4 . 9/16/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
Guest chapter 13 . 9/16/2013
Short but funny. Found the beginning ironically hilarious with Hercules using a crazy King Arthur as a human shield and then a living projectile. Strikes me as funny for some reason. Especially with how he and Archer were worried when they got back, like two battle nuts would pay enough attention to find them during a brawl. Until next time.
Zaralann chapter 13 . 9/16/2013
HERACLES chapter 4 . 8/31/2013
Marvel Comics?
Reishin Amara chapter 12 . 3/13/2013
pure wait for more!

hercules as saber is funny lol...hes so big he can restrain servants like arturia.
lord Martiya chapter 9 . 1/25/2013
Not Arcueid... Please, not Arcueid!
lord Martiya chapter 5 . 1/25/2013
Well, he DID suck as a musician in the legend...
lord Martiya chapter 3 . 1/25/2013
Shirou has won. As soon as he can power Saber, he's the winner.
By the way, did you know that, according to mythology, Medea and Herakles have a bond of Sacred Hospitality?
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