|Reviews for TBDH: STRAIGHT Version|
| Howwedoit chapter 21 . 6/2
| CantYouSeeImReading chapter 21 . 5/26
I don't know if you are continuing this, but I wanted to tell you that I love it. Both with the unconventional pairings and with the submissive Harry and Alpha Megan. I hope you do continue. Thanks for writing.
| Wish Lost chapter 21 . 4/20
I really enjoy reading this version and the other one. I hope to see more updates on this in the future since this hasn't been updated since last August! :)
| Guest chapter 21 . 4/4
Please update this I have been dying to see more
| Ottawa Pagan chapter 21 . 3/31
it's interesting to read this after reading your original story, and to see the twists you've made. Love it :)
| anonymous chapter 17 . 3/25
To be honest I'm reading this to see which version I like the most and so far I like this one the most. Im a disappointed that this story hasn't been updated. I'm very well aware that the story has the basic outlined e of the actual original but. With the fact that Harry has a female circle it might lead or change the story. I know im just one reader but I hope you pick this story back up.
| xider chapter 16 . 3/14
wow this is difrent than the other, tbdh, made me ingnore all of my following fanfics that were updating, it was that good, and now im starting to feel the draw to it as well, shame that you have only had the time to update only 21 chapters, i actually thought it was 25 when i first saw it.
| xider chapter 7 . 3/14
i still cant believe he still ran, he should have said something. i just hope it doesn't take twenty chapters again just for councle man terius to accept him in this one.
| xider chapter 1 . 3/14
yay, still a silverwing. also will bahn be making an aperance in this one as well? and if he does will he still be friends with his circle? ah, so thats why i was suprised why you never answered, compleatly forgot about that. though i am curious, is harry still gonna go after someone with a blood title from the royal courts like he did with hadrian? if he did then it would be pretty cool, and il find out as soon as i hit the (next) page button. hurrah.
| DJinTheHOUse chapter 5 . 2/8
through the years i have turned into a yaoi fangirl all the way. But reading the TBDH Yaoi one, i decided to look at your other fanfiction's and im like what the hell lets read a straight fanfiction. It's not usually my cup of tea, but i just LOVE it, i have never heard of Meagan Jones, until you mentioned her and i really like her character. and i can't wait to read harry and his gaggle of girls in his circle. You got my support and love through all of our stories and i plan on reading them all. 10/10 rated.
| PlatinumDragon11 chapter 21 . 2/6
Hello and Good Afternoon. Hope that everything is well and going good for you. So lets get to it, I first found your first story of TBDH where Theo was his Alpha and even though I don't really like reading guy on guy stories I just would change he to she and him to her for Harry being female and some creative re-arranging some words in my mind so that in the story Harry is Female. But other than that it was an enjoyable story so far, read 92 of the 94 chapters currently released. I will continue to read that story as you put more out as it is a very highly interesting story (Even with slash!) and am really looking forward to his other mates joining, I am highly surprised that you have written 94 chapters of story and so far he only has Theo and Charlie as his mates so far and only just now fully bonded the three. But anyway i have gotten way off course and I do apologize. For this story I just found it recently and was beyond ecstatic, finally what i was looking for even if the love making has been removed and hope that you will make an unedited version later, but was saddened to find that even though you started writing this story not long after you began the Slash version that there was only 21 chapters, but I do understand that this stories Divergence has begun right after the hospital event and now it has become more of an original content instead of a copy of the other story. I hope he gets a Nitiri the little dragon he had that was given to him by charlie but now instead of charlie it will be Daphne this looks like it will be very interesting. I know you have heard a thousand times people saying MORE MORE MORE NOW NOW NOW! which can get annoying especially if that is all that they write and do not give any feed back or encouragement or advice about how the story is running but I cannot help but feel impatient on new content even though I know it takes time to write excellent chapters as you have produced thus far in both of your stories. So please forgive me on my selfish desire to wanting to read more and keep up the great work on both stories and I hope your muse comes on with vengeance with lots of great ideas for your story and you get lots of free time to be able to hash it all out. :) :D Enjoy your evening and have a great year.
| AJx7 chapter 1 . 1/22
Please do not give up! I need more.
| German chapter 21 . 12/31/2014
Please update soon
| Keiren-Kun89 chapter 21 . 11/23/2014
This is really good!
| Flutterbytink chapter 21 . 11/17/2014
Please say you aren't going to copy tbdh but with girls for Harry instead of guys? I think that it should be different and have different scenarios.