|Reviews for Burning Legion|
| Guest chapter 46 . 1/11
Brath is a total TOOL! Oh my gosh, where is a mallet when you need one?! Rip off his face with a cheese grater, string him up by his guts-! *countless more expletives and death threats*
And don't even get me started on Mr. Teen Wolf, Eric! You had better be good to her and not create drama you little Mage, or I got a hack saw with your name on it!
I got your back Amy.
| lolitazilla chapter 34 . 1/11
Picturing Nicolas in a men in black suit is gonna give me a nose bleed.. and what is up with everyone thinking Amy and Brath are together?! ... Not that Amy doesn't like him (she's totally in denial).
| lolitazilla chapter 30 . 1/10
Awww *bleeep*, this just got reeeaaal...
There is going to be epic butt kicking, isn't the Rest? Ooh, I'm so excited..!
| lolitazilla chapter 26 . 1/10
Don't worry, Amy. I'm sure you and Michel will get along fine later. Also, where's Brath when you need him to rip some undead face off?!
| lolitazilla chapter 20 . 1/8
Breath is a complete ass, but sometimes I feel like he's growing on me. Not like the fungus way, more like a destructive puppy of your cousins that you have to watch while they're on vacation. I know that sounds so weird, but it's so true... Don't you dare start hitting on Amy, or I'll introduce you to my chainsaw...
| lolitazilla chapter 17 . 1/8
... Wow. Oh, my gosh, Amy, I feel so bad right now... Everything's gone? Really? Just... God. Brath, you're an asshole...
..I'm so sorry, Amy...
| lolitazilla chapter 12 . 1/8
Oh, so, is this around when Wraithion was killing all of the black dragons, or something else? It would be funny if Amy ever met him,hehe... Brath, you can't do subtle with Amy, she's a little slow. And did she just get poisoned? Why does Amy's life suck so much?
| lolitazilla chapter 6 . 1/8
Freaking Alliance/Horde separations.. If someone needs a heal, you give it, people! That'so the only thing about WoW I hate, the stupid faction wars... Rant over now. I'm seriously loving this story.
| lolitazilla chapter 3 . 1/8
Wow, she's making fun of Lord of the Rings... That's mean. And oh my gosh, she meets the goblins first?! Bwahahaha! Perfect, just perfect...
| lolitazilla chapter 2 . 1/8
Brave girl. I couldn't have done that, haha! Holy shnickies, falling from the sky?! Don't laugh, scream like Bloody Mary! !(0o0)!
| lolitazilla chapter 1 . 1/8
This is so interesting... It's like Warcraft apocalypse. I loved it!
| TheJackinati275 chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
Where to begin with this Story.
It was well written, at first i did not really like your main character, but i grew to like her, you have also set out the characters very well.
However i had a very hard time believing that a group of magic wielding demons would ever be able to stand up to modern Weaponry, and that has made your story largely unpalatable to me unfortunately.
Seriously, you have written it like Humanity is inept in the 'arts of war', when if you had a single apache Helicopter with their rocket launchers and M134's, you could literally destroy a whole army of Medieval troops, There are countries which have bombers capable of dropping multiple Nuclear devices, get what i am saying?.
They have even tested period authentic renaissance breast plates against modern bullets, did it offer protection, yes it did against most pistol rounds except for FMJ 45. ACP rounds, but put it up against any rifle round except 22. LR, it will go right through the armour and into the person who is donning the armour.
I have a very hard time believing that Earth Humans would be so badly beaten back, and since that is the major part on which your story is set upon, well as i have said before, it made the story largely unpalatable for me.
To me, it felt like you have made reality suffer to make your story much easier to write, which is fine, but you did so in a way that i personally do not like, I think i know why you have made Humans weaker and that was to make the character's trials and errors much more important to the story and to set a backdrop by which to make the viewer feel.
I hope this review does not sound offensive, but i am writing down exactly how i personally feel towards your story, it was very well written but i was let down with the 'Earth Humans', if you had made it look like the Earth Humans put up a fight of which they grudgingly lost, i would have been much more interested in your story.
| Khaylie chapter 57 . 7/23/2014
This was a breathtaking chapter. I have to admit that I didnt like Michel at all in the beginning of the story. He was too much of a "know-it-all" and I dont like that. But then again, I would probably be the same if I was in the same situation. Anyway, then he turned out to be a traitor which was even worse. And then we found out he wasn't. And then I started to like him. And now I like him even more :)
I'm very pleased to see that the second arc of the story is up and running. I haven't been on fanfiction much lately but now I probably will again. Soo exciting!
| Jack100 chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
honestly I don't see the burning legion even taking one country if they actually go for a straight on invasion. I mean even if they were invisible like here the minute a single country falls and a spy satellite sees a whole bunch of dudes in the infra red spectrum and none on the visible one their game would've being up. Afterwards well if a bunch of dudes with plate armor and swords of a distinctly non-magical type can kill a demon/inferno in reasonable time then a bunch of dudes with autocannons, machine guns, artillery and missiles will absolutely shred them. their only advantage over us is magic but from what i've seen (which admittedly is all from warcraft 3 cause i don't play wow) they need to be able to see their targets or atleast be somewhat near them to cast spells and spells that don't have that limitation needs an extensive prep time and ritual, our missiles and arty don't have that limitation because spy satellites and radio, so the minute their spell casters get on the battlefield their going to be hit so hard there would be nothing but pink mist and all i can say for the portal is nukes, through them, with very large payloads. All in all the legion would have employ infiltration tactics to win against us like with the elves during their first invasion of azeroth a straight up invasion like this one would be dealt with rather quickly.
| MMiladinova chapter 57 . 7/17/2014
Woah... Unexpected but happily accepted! Congrats on the book btw!