Reviews for The lost son |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The part about Sheppard wanting to get Gibbs back into bed, was an unworthy thought in this otherwise fine story of yours. There may have been some genuine affection between Jethro and Jenny, but I think her motives were very similar to Morrow's, only for different reasons. If word had gotten around that a junior agent was being harassed and bullied by a senior agent, it would have invited unwanted scrutiny upon NCIS, which would have shined a light on Shepard's use of her power to carry-out a personal vendetta against one arms dealer. Plus, it would've cast doubt on her fitness run NCIS, and being the first female Director, she had plenty of scrutiny and doubts on her already. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even after all the things people have said to him about her, Gibbs is still fixated on that notion of Abby as hi daughter. I have to wonder, if Kelly had survived, would Gibbs have allowed her to grow up and be like Abby. It is a father's duty to protect his children, but sometimes that protection should take the form of letting them make their mistakes, and learning from them. Its not always about riding in on a white horse to save the day, it is also about teaching them to stand on their own two feet, come what may. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That whole, 'Dearest'-thing at the beginning sounded all wrong for Gibbs. I get that he was trying to prove in a letter how sincere he was, but it sounds a little too 'ass-kissy, and that's not Leroy Jethro Gibbs. I believe, 'My Dear, Tim,' would have sufficed to show Gibbs's sincerity, without sounding too much like he was blowing sunshine up McGee's ass. Either way, I wouldn't have believed a word of Gibbs's letter. It sounded too much like he was saying all the things McGee wanted to hear, but it didn't sound real to me. |
![]() ![]() If DiNozzo is the best agent in NCIS I'd really hate to meet the worst! |
![]() ![]() Pity no-one had time to record what McGee did to Sargent Miller so that he could show it to DiNozzo! |
![]() ![]() McGee is the brains of the team,Schito is the mouth of the team,she never shuts up . |
![]() ![]() ![]() hola no me canso de leer esta historia. me gustaría que escribieras otra historia sobre mcgee, si es posible una sobre kate, me encanta ese personaje y su muerte fue un golpe inesperado. exelente escritura, no puedo dejar de leer. |
![]() ![]() Someone needs to head slap Gibbs |
![]() ![]() Jimmy is such a sweaty. In the 1950s a team of US military servicemen went into a nuclear reactor that was in the process of melting down to prevent it from entering total meltdown, which would have been a catastrophic failure that reloaded in a significant loss of life. One of those service members with later go on to become President Jimmy Carter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() me encantó, muy buena historia aunque lamenté mucho la muerte de la dulce capitana. fue genial la castración del idiota. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aaa nooo yo siempre quise que kate se quedara con mcgee, sí, ella tenía defectos como todos, pero a diferencia de los demás kate al igual que mcgee fue muy empática y sé que esta pareja hubiera llegado muy lejos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is anyone else concerned that Rose de Sharon hasn't written anything since 2015, and she was known to visit Paris? If you are still around but not writing, can you let us know? Otherwise, I'm going to mourn you as one who was killed in the 2015 Paris shooting/suicide bombing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very cute story. Thank you for sharing this story with us. I do have to say... you and Ziva are very much alike. You both speak English very well but often use the wrong word. Your most notable being souvenir. Memory is the word you should have been using, and the two words are similar but not normally interchangeable. Adorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Afghans who follow the Taliban may have darker skin, hair, and eyes, BUT there is an ethnic group of Afghani who are light skinned, blondes, with blue and green eyes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far |